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Perpetual
I never believed much in fate until I met you. Everything made sense and everyone around us observed and encouraged. But fate felt like it was quite claustrophobic. It felt as if this independent heart suddenly didn't have her own choice. Nevertheless, I chose to leave knowing you were probably best for me, but freedom is my first love and you were merely destiny.
Published 4th Aug 2017
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4th Aug 2017 1:40am
Perhaps letting go is your lesson in this Life. The greatest is to train yourself to let go of all you fear to lose.
Whether or not that was Freedom or Fate remains to be seen by the accompaniment or absence of regret.
Good to see you posting again. Great introspective verse.
Whether or not that was Freedom or Fate remains to be seen by the accompaniment or absence of regret.
Good to see you posting again. Great introspective verse.
4th Aug 2017 6:42am
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4th Aug 2017 5:20pm
That is so beautiful. I believe in fate. I met a lady and truly believe it was fate who brought us together
8th Aug 2017 10:51am
Tells my me...you lead with your mind, not heart...I've yet to get to that level...excellent expressive ink spilling...
