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Neighboring Blaze
Brooding at noon
A languishing Lithuanian's yard consumed
~
Slack smoke cloaks children's moon
Northward fires diffuse
Descending film - tinting shadows blue
Charred wafts of grime perfume
Entomb in haze of burning fume
A languishing Lithuanian's yard consumed
~
Slack smoke cloaks children's moon
Northward fires diffuse
Descending film - tinting shadows blue
Charred wafts of grime perfume
Entomb in haze of burning fume
Published 2nd Aug 2017
| Edited 30th Sep 2017
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3rd Aug 2017 7:38am
3rd Aug 2017 8:18am
There are fires up in British Columbia and I live in WA state. The skies were really smoky and smelled very burnt today :(
3rd Aug 2017 9:39am
incredible, Kasai also lives in Washington; that's the smoke & fire she was relating to me...
3rd Aug 2017 11:27am
3rd Aug 2017 2:58pm
Loved the descriptions here, nicely done.
And did you get a view of that blood orange sun?
Brings back memories of firestorm...
And did you get a view of that blood orange sun?
Brings back memories of firestorm...
3rd Aug 2017 7:56pm
Yes! It was eerie...the entire day felt "off, didn't it?
Thank you both for the encouragement, I read through some of your work and I'm truly inspired to be in a community with deep and skilled people :)
Thank you both for the encouragement, I read through some of your work and I'm truly inspired to be in a community with deep and skilled people :)
5th Aug 2017 7:57am
The entire day, yes, the entire week. Felt like the end of days around here. You've got an excellent writing style here, looking forward to more...
