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The Itch
Fushia tones flush adrenaline
Rich and thickly under tongues
Turning them unwelcomely dry
A cord in your neck augments
So perceptible with it's taut ticking
And I would arch my own to
Taste your salt
Above it's beat
If only coaxed...
For my capillaries cavort beneath shy cheeks
Under my umber summer spots
Freckles kindled flush to betray thoughts
I prefer to tightly keep
Hidden...
But your pupils protract
As if to embrace all of me
Extracting evidence my epicurean cues tattled
//
Lush air suspends "friends"
Heavy (indeed, nearly heaving) with alternate goals
Craving to blend their loose ends
Consciences stroked by infatuated illicit themes
Estimating tender ends to dreams
Rending friendzone fences at the seams
Rich and thickly under tongues
Turning them unwelcomely dry
A cord in your neck augments
So perceptible with it's taut ticking
And I would arch my own to
Taste your salt
Above it's beat
If only coaxed...
For my capillaries cavort beneath shy cheeks
Under my umber summer spots
Freckles kindled flush to betray thoughts
I prefer to tightly keep
Hidden...
But your pupils protract
As if to embrace all of me
Extracting evidence my epicurean cues tattled
//
Lush air suspends "friends"
Heavy (indeed, nearly heaving) with alternate goals
Craving to blend their loose ends
Consciences stroked by infatuated illicit themes
Estimating tender ends to dreams
Rending friendzone fences at the seams
Published 2nd Aug 2017
| Edited 30th Sep 2017
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Anonymous
2nd Aug 2017 8:53am
Good Stuff!
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Welcome to DUP
2nd Aug 2017 9:27am
2nd Aug 2017 4:36pm
2nd Aug 2017 8:15pm
I have absolutely no clue what to do with that. ^
I did edit this, and altered a few lines that needed work, and re-submitted it with a new name. You said the same thing on my last piece. I didn't edit it for you, (don't get me wrong) but it would be helpful to receive constructive comments if you think this is mediocre.
I did edit this, and altered a few lines that needed work, and re-submitted it with a new name. You said the same thing on my last piece. I didn't edit it for you, (don't get me wrong) but it would be helpful to receive constructive comments if you think this is mediocre.
3rd Aug 2017 5:50pm
Nicely done! Your poetry is very interesting to read, fresh and crisp, pulling the stings in my mind, love it!
3rd Aug 2017 8:15pm
