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Denim domnicella
Bathed in the chaos of stars and vodka,
I rose from fallen raindrops.
That hidden place where all beauty comes from
calls to me at night;
an echo of myself, she whisperes my name.
Tereska ~ softly strange, like the ghost of a kiss.
Survival is bleak among the plumes of smoke and broken glass.
Concrete rivers are no place for tears,
they hit the ground hard and smolder like a spitfire.
I keep them close in the back pocket of a tight pair of jeans,
between a switchblade and a rogue caress.
Sorrow has chosen the form of a woman,
the desperate allure of a fragile creature,
catching the eye of temptation.
It clings wonderfully: satin and sin, perfume and allusion.
I am her.
Where is the man who sings like a destructive angel - Elvis in leather.
(Artwork: Joan Blease)
I rose from fallen raindrops.
That hidden place where all beauty comes from
calls to me at night;
an echo of myself, she whisperes my name.
Tereska ~ softly strange, like the ghost of a kiss.
Survival is bleak among the plumes of smoke and broken glass.
Concrete rivers are no place for tears,
they hit the ground hard and smolder like a spitfire.
I keep them close in the back pocket of a tight pair of jeans,
between a switchblade and a rogue caress.
Sorrow has chosen the form of a woman,
the desperate allure of a fragile creature,
catching the eye of temptation.
It clings wonderfully: satin and sin, perfume and allusion.
I am her.
Where is the man who sings like a destructive angel - Elvis in leather.
(Artwork: Joan Blease)
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Re. Denim domnicella
1st Aug 2017 7:48am
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1st Aug 2017 8:18am
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and kind words, Jadedembers, very much appreciated...
Re. Denim domnicella
1st Aug 2017 7:58am
not even Julie London could cry those concrete rivers;
we hear the echo, Kas, so strange & so soft ~ Tereska...
we hear the echo, Kas, so strange & so soft ~ Tereska...
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Re: Re. Denim domnicella
1st Aug 2017 8:39am
Ah, Julie London, so beautiful. And that echo, delicate on a distant breeze; I hear it, John, I hear it...
Re. Denim domnicella
1st Aug 2017 8:20am
lovely Kasai this was both dangerous & divine
adore the ending it gave me a wry smile
imagining such a man..
stunning ink..
love Crim
adore the ending it gave me a wry smile
imagining such a man..
stunning ink..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Denim domnicella
4th Aug 2017 7:36am
Glad I could share a smile with you, Crim, I'm right there with you. Thanks for coming to read, kind lady...
Re. Denim domnicella
A hollowpoint of seeking, Kas. We all yearn for that like-minded person to hold our hand and walk with us.
Years are precious indeed, guard them well. ❤
Years are precious indeed, guard them well. ❤
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Re: Re. Denim domnicella
4th Aug 2017 9:30am
Yes we do; sometimes we don't realize we're searching unitil we stumble upon them blindly. Those years, we hold them close. Thank you, wise one...
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2017 11:16pm
Sweet Kasai, fragile creatures which will endure the smoke and broken glass under our feet if it leads to that one special man...the tears will absorb the smoke and layer the broken glass with a silken sheen...stunning poetry as always...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. Denim domnicella
4th Aug 2017 3:27pm
Those tears; pehaps their purpose is just that profound. The view is stunning through your eyes, dear lady, thank you so much for sharing it with me...
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4th Aug 2017 7:07am
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4th Aug 2017 3:28pm
Re. Denim domnicella
4th Aug 2017 3:31pm
This is pure gold.the imagery just drop kicked me in the face.
the first line hooks,and every line thereafter holds my senses captive.well penned Kasai, keep'em coming.
the first line hooks,and every line thereafter holds my senses captive.well penned Kasai, keep'em coming.
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That's always great to hear, glad you enjoyed reading, samael. Thank you much for the kind words and a place on your list..
Re. Denim domnicella
6th Aug 2017 8:47am
This poem succeeds at two levels both as poetry and philosophy.I enjoyed immensely.Kexby
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Re: Re. Denim domnicella
6th Aug 2017 9:20am
Thanks so much, Kexby, for such a thoughtful and kind comment, really appreciate it...
Re. Denim domnicella
14th Aug 2017 1:02am
may souls ache and vulnerability converge with desires delicious cruelty saturate out side the bounds of reason for pleasures sake :)
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14th Aug 2017 7:12am
A soul can lead us far beyond reason and the journey never ends. Thank you so much for the thoughtful words...
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