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In the Hall Somebody Stood
I locked the door, hearing its click,
Inside The Hovel I felt good;
Picked up the phone to call a chick,
But in the hall somebody stood.
I shook off the effect of fear,
And I called the girl like I should;
To calm my nerves I had a beer,
Still . . . in the hall somebody stood.
ŠJuly 31, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton
Inside The Hovel I felt good;
Picked up the phone to call a chick,
But in the hall somebody stood.
I shook off the effect of fear,
And I called the girl like I should;
To calm my nerves I had a beer,
Still . . . in the hall somebody stood.
ŠJuly 31, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton
Published 31st Jul 2017
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2017 9:39pm
Jerry, although short, this is not so sweet, lol...made my muscles tense...very well done! I hope whoever is in the hall, stays the hell out...I'm now going to snuggle under my blanket...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
1st Aug 2017 10:24pm
Ahhh . . . Thanks you for reading and commenting on the first of five little "shorties, Taryn."
Anonymous
5th Aug 2017 3:39am
Hey Jerry......I see you have a series of these chilling inks.......I'm making my way theu them......enjoyed this one.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
