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In the Hall Someone Struck a Match
The rain has stopped and all is calm,
I listened and heard not a scratch;
Still I started saying my psalms,
In the hall someone struck a match.
I sat straight up and sniffed aloud,
This old place will burn up like thatch;
I smelled cigarette smoke and cowed,
In the hall someone struck a match.
ŠAugust 1, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton
I listened and heard not a scratch;
Still I started saying my psalms,
In the hall someone struck a match.
I sat straight up and sniffed aloud,
This old place will burn up like thatch;
I smelled cigarette smoke and cowed,
In the hall someone struck a match.
ŠAugust 1, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton
Published 1st Aug 2017
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1st Aug 2017 3:36pm
dearest Jerry this is a very deep write
I feel you on saying your prayers
given the situation a lot said
with few words..
fantastic..
love Brenda
I feel you on saying your prayers
given the situation a lot said
with few words..
fantastic..
love Brenda
1st Aug 2017 4:14pm
Sending you many thanks, Brenda. It is amazing what certain sounds will get to you in the middle of the night.
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2nd Aug 2017 1:49am
Jerry, this combined with the other lurking in the halls had me feeling as if you presently feel as if a hell of some sort and this saddens me to think so...sending hugs your way my friend...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
2nd Aug 2017 1:32pm
I'm okay, Taryn, having some dark thoughts is all. Thank you for your concern.
5th Aug 2017 3:41am
Hey Jerry........this one makes me feel like I need to check my house.......enjoyed.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
