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Desire me dangerous
Captive are we who are cast aside by mountains,
crudely chiseled from stone, borrowing shadows.
With callow stains upon my cheeks, I cradle my illicit desires.
Cacti loom like green monuments in the valley of the sun.
I'm the girl who casts a tall shadow
upon those majestic mountains, so beautiful and so cruel.
My hands & eyes journey far to hunt an elusive lover;
I envy the heat of a painted sunrise for touching what I cannot.
Pieces of his heart lie in the dust
where a soldier has walked.
He has stories inside that go beyond metaphor.
He wants me - to write me; steal what I am.
A woman made of tears & passion, like any woman;
that makes us dangerous to love.
(Artwork: Alice Boughton)
crudely chiseled from stone, borrowing shadows.
With callow stains upon my cheeks, I cradle my illicit desires.
Cacti loom like green monuments in the valley of the sun.
I'm the girl who casts a tall shadow
upon those majestic mountains, so beautiful and so cruel.
My hands & eyes journey far to hunt an elusive lover;
I envy the heat of a painted sunrise for touching what I cannot.
Pieces of his heart lie in the dust
where a soldier has walked.
He has stories inside that go beyond metaphor.
He wants me - to write me; steal what I am.
A woman made of tears & passion, like any woman;
that makes us dangerous to love.
(Artwork: Alice Boughton)
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Re. Desire me dangerous
31st Jul 2017 6:50am
you maintain your desires in a tall shadow, Kas;
we take your passion & tears to make poems...
we take your passion & tears to make poems...
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31st Jul 2017 7:36am
Yes, John, passion and tears; they spill onto the page like brushstrokes. Thank you...
Re. Desire me dangerous
31st Jul 2017 7:29am
Kasai, I have no other words besides saying that this is beautiful and amazing. Good work.
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Anonymous
31st Jul 2017 1:35pm
Sweet Kasai, something would be amiss in a woman with no tears or passion...they would be the ones who are dangerous in my opinion...we are the ones who have the ability to bring all encompassing rapture into one's life...we are only dangerous to those who are unable to fathom such passion that flows within our veins...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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8th Aug 2017 6:44am
What a most beautiful and thoughful comment, sweet lady and how very true. It's always eye opening to hear your thoughts, see from your point of view. A woman with no tears...I can't even imagine. Like liquid passion straight from the heart. Thank you so much, dear Taryn...
Re. Desire me dangerous
31st Jul 2017 1:51pm
You showcased a desire almost unattainable... gorgeous writing Kasai...a small suggestion, after line two I believe there is a need for a line break as the narrative changes from plural to singular.
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Re: Re. Desire me dangerous
8th Aug 2017 6:47am
Unattainable indeed, perhaps it gives us something to hope for. I really appreciate the feedback, Tim, thank you for taking the time to share...
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31st Jul 2017 3:00pm
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Anonymous
31st Jul 2017 3:44pm
"I envy the heat of a painted sunrise for touching what I cannot"
That's such an incredibly powerful line in its longing. Such beautiful words and imagery you've drawn here.
That's such an incredibly powerful line in its longing. Such beautiful words and imagery you've drawn here.
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Re: Re. Desire me dangerous
8th Aug 2017 6:51am
Oh that sun, the way it touches all even when we cannot... Thank you, Ash, so glad you could share this with me...
Re. Desire me dangerous
1st Aug 2017 6:34am
lovely Kasai you taste of the purest of magic
reading you is breathtaking
within this write you reach the highest heights
& touch our souls..
love Crim
reading you is breathtaking
within this write you reach the highest heights
& touch our souls..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Desire me dangerous
9th Aug 2017 4:26am
Such beautiful words you've given me, how I adore them, kind lady. Always enjoyable when you come to visit and share your lovely thoughts. Thank you, talented one...
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11th Aug 2017 7:16am
There's a lot to be said of a whisper, sometimes less is more. So glad you enjoyed and I thank you for commenting...
Re. Desire me dangerous
17th Aug 2017 8:37am
'that makes us dangerous to love. '
dangerous but a must all the same..
a just in the name of wandering hearts
what is life without the risk i say..
captivating write
dangerous but a must all the same..
a just in the name of wandering hearts
what is life without the risk i say..
captivating write
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Re: Re. Desire me dangerous
17th Aug 2017 8:49am
Perhaps life is not life, without the risk? Glad you came to read, Naajir, and I thank you for the kind comment...