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bliss
he jumped
off the ship
in ocean deep
the turbulence
on surface
reflected
not only the grey
yet the deep
is what
he seeked
for it held
the calm
he leaped
limbs tied
toes first
broke
the tension
sinking slowly
taking it in
being in it
long
beautiful
blue
bliss
before
the cold
black
blank.
off the ship
in ocean deep
the turbulence
on surface
reflected
not only the grey
yet the deep
is what
he seeked
for it held
the calm
he leaped
limbs tied
toes first
broke
the tension
sinking slowly
taking it in
being in it
long
beautiful
blue
bliss
before
the cold
black
blank.
Published 25th Jul 2017
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25th Jul 2017 6:25am
Suicide:
Where the guilty go unpunished
and the innocent do not
A solution.... perhaps
An answer....?
The poet, expression: not in question.
A thought provoking poem for sure.
Where the guilty go unpunished
and the innocent do not
A solution.... perhaps
An answer....?
The poet, expression: not in question.
A thought provoking poem for sure.
28th Jul 2017 11:02am
https://www.nytimes.com/2015/01/11/arts/design/ray-johnson-defies-categories-20-years-after-his-death.html
25th Jul 2017 6:43am
Portrays the taking of ones on life well. Provokes much emotion as well as thought in it's observant dialogue.
Reminds me of one of my older pens a great deal, though the name escapes me, this is far more profound. Poetry at it's finest.
~anonshadow
Reminds me of one of my older pens a great deal, though the name escapes me, this is far more profound. Poetry at it's finest.
~anonshadow
28th Jul 2017 11:06am
when the time comes
some have no choice
well, no one has any choice
have they?
appreciation
held close
of both the peer
and his review
some have no choice
well, no one has any choice
have they?
appreciation
held close
of both the peer
and his review
25th Jul 2017 12:22pm
28th Jul 2017 11:07am
