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Over the Rainbow
On this side of the rainbow is my life
A routine pattern that includes strife.
The other side is bright and tempting
A place where troubles could be ending.
Would my problems all be mended
If I sought where the rainbows ended?
Could my dilemmas all be solved
My past life cleansed and absolved
Uncertain of the way ahead
Perhaps some light will be shed
Relationships need sorting out
Clear up where there is a doubt
They say there is a crock of gold
To find it you must be bold
I'll set out tomorrow if I dare
As long the rainbow is still there
Published 23rd Jul 2017
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23rd Jul 2017 9:01am
I am inclined to agree with Sweet oblivion How ever may I add ?
verse 1 'troubles end'
2 cleansed . . .absolved
3 where there is doubt
4 remove still
None of this interferes with your rhyming Kexby
verse 1 'troubles end'
2 cleansed . . .absolved
3 where there is doubt
4 remove still
None of this interferes with your rhyming Kexby
Where there is a rainbow, there is hope. That's what I learn from the old wisdom. It's true that everyone has two sides of the rainbow, including myself. The conflict between them will never end.....but I am happy to have these two .
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
