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LIFE
He came to me
not to bid me good night
but to expunge the spark of my life
To live in fear
rather than faith
makes a child grow inwards
When hands don't caress
but claw at skin and hurt
you learn how to hide within yourself
My body is mine
too terrorized to articulate
a child's fundamental right of inviolacy
When I chose to stay from harm
although it meant punishment
the healthier alternative was mine
When a mother
chooses to look the other way
which way remains for a daughter
Having been disposed of
after 18 years of abuse
was no less than being saved at last
My wishes my will my body
not meant for everyone
just for those who care
My life will be mine
and yours if you choose
to catch me if I fall
not to bid me good night
but to expunge the spark of my life
To live in fear
rather than faith
makes a child grow inwards
When hands don't caress
but claw at skin and hurt
you learn how to hide within yourself
My body is mine
too terrorized to articulate
a child's fundamental right of inviolacy
When I chose to stay from harm
although it meant punishment
the healthier alternative was mine
When a mother
chooses to look the other way
which way remains for a daughter
Having been disposed of
after 18 years of abuse
was no less than being saved at last
My wishes my will my body
not meant for everyone
just for those who care
My life will be mine
and yours if you choose
to catch me if I fall
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Re. LIFE
22nd Jul 2017 6:06pm
Great ink, Miss Chi.
Brilliant twist to the positive in the two final stanzas.
Brilliant twist to the positive in the two final stanzas.
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In the end everything will be okay. If it's not okay it's not the end ... Thank you very much - for reading and thinking the poem through ;).
Re. LIFE
22nd Jul 2017 6:29pm
Re: Re. LIFE
26th Sep 2017 6:13pm
Hi cold_fusion, nice that you've read my poem and commented on it so thoughtfully. I'm not so sure that life always trumps tyranny. There's so much evidence against it. And it will get worse. But thank you anyway!
Re. LIFE
22nd Jul 2017 7:08pm
There is so much strength in this poem and the ending is brilliant Miss Chi.
It's all about perseverance.
It's all about perseverance.
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Re: Re. LIFE
26th Sep 2017 6:17pm
Perseverance is my middle name, Rina :-). Swim or drown. I made my choice. Thank you, dear friend! As always.
Re. LIFE
22nd Jul 2017 8:51pm
Re: Re. LIFE
26th Sep 2017 6:20pm
Muchísimas gracias, cariño, for feeling what I wanted to convey. Glad you're here.
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26th Sep 2017 6:21pm
Re. LIFE
23rd Jul 2017 1:35am
Needles of life....we become the ones hidden in the haystack....once in a while we are lucky to be found.
Strong Write Miss Chi!!!
Strong Write Miss Chi!!!
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Re: Re. LIFE
26th Sep 2017 6:19pm
Glad you read it, soul, am honored by your knowing comment. Although sometimes it's good to be hidden in a haystack. Unless someone sets it on fire ...
Re. LIFE
2nd Aug 2017 8:01am
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26th Sep 2017 6:25pm
Written from the bottom of my soul. The journey was long and painful but turned out alright. Thank you for your kind words, John.
Re. LIFE
2nd Oct 2017 9:49pm
Re: Re. LIFE
2nd Oct 2017 9:54pm
Thank you so much, MisanthropicShynes. In retrospective ... I'm glad I was able to write it.