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Dark Stars Rise
the sun strikes the Earth
with energy pulses
a solar flare flexes
bringer of negative energy
fear & anxiety
at an all time high
the alien hive
sends out pings
hitting each other
with internal signals
sent telepathically
the Queen must be protected
they stand guard over her
sending coded messages
the ancient deity can't decipher
he sought to destroy her
eons upon eons ago
using henchmen
to do the dirty work
she has encountered these beings
in this realm
has marked them in her mind
all three have crossed her path
though they were used
as weapons of her destruction
she has compassion on them
& protects their existence
creating an exit
in another system
she will not leave
until each dark star soldier
is safely hidden
& brought under her dominion
the moon will eclipse the sun
a sign to her people
that she is at her most powerful
they need not fear
the heavy handed judgement
injected into their hearts
upon entering this dimension
this is the hour, this is the day
we are at war
see all of you on the other side
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 20th Jul 2017
| Edited 21st Jul 2017
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20th Jul 2017 11:26pm
Ferociously potent babe
But Crim there is no other side
for ones like us
only expansion to
consume everything
So make sure you have your appetite it's a buffet of breathing lights that awaits
But Crim there is no other side
for ones like us
only expansion to
consume everything
So make sure you have your appetite it's a buffet of breathing lights that awaits
20th Jul 2017 11:39pm
thank you graciously dearest Quiet One I have a great appetite ;) I can't wait.. love Crim
21st Jul 2017 00:34am
It is the other side, my friend, where we will all -- those of us who care -- will meet and regroup.
21st Jul 2017 00:55am
21st Jul 2017 2:12am
Anonymous
21st Jul 2017 2:17am
You have such a loving soul, my beautiful Dark Angel. I will stand by your side in this war. This is a strong write with beautiful imagery.
So much love for you...
So much love for you...
21st Jul 2017 2:53am
feels like seeing through this existence through your talented mind as I read.
The places you take us, always profound.
Amazing poetry, dear lady, maybe I'll see you on the other side...
The places you take us, always profound.
Amazing poetry, dear lady, maybe I'll see you on the other side...
21st Jul 2017 8:24am
Anonymous
22nd Jul 2017 00:57am
Brenda.. i love this type of content.. the whole alien vibe.. i dig it.. love you sis..
Anonymous
22nd Jul 2017 4:25am
Oh my love....I wish you were sitting next to me when I read this...I smiled so wide and exclaimed "yes!!" loudly when reading these lines....that's my girl...my Beautiful Brenda...always and forever....dear gods how I love you!!
"all three have crossed her path
though they were used
as weapons of her destruction
she has compassion on them
& protects their existence"
- it's all right there, always cradled by you...
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
"all three have crossed her path
though they were used
as weapons of her destruction
she has compassion on them
& protects their existence"
- it's all right there, always cradled by you...
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
22nd Jul 2017 4:31pm
22nd Jul 2017 7:25pm
Dazzling work, Lady Crim. This has an epic quality to it, and the details are thrilling. Hope I'm on the right side when the time comes.
26th Jul 2017 7:00pm
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