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Self-Pity
I've been wantin' to write a song since I was 17 years old
put my own things to the side, to help another man grow
Now I'm here at 25 tryna find what I stand for
With my little girls eyes watching every move close
I lost all my sense of pride, Had me laying on the floor
Felt so much pain inside still couldn't make it out that door
Felt like I failed my daughter inside, let her see her momma choke.
Saw the pain all in her eyes, knew that it was time to go.
Copyrights 7/19/17
put my own things to the side, to help another man grow
Now I'm here at 25 tryna find what I stand for
With my little girls eyes watching every move close
I lost all my sense of pride, Had me laying on the floor
Felt so much pain inside still couldn't make it out that door
Felt like I failed my daughter inside, let her see her momma choke.
Saw the pain all in her eyes, knew that it was time to go.
Copyrights 7/19/17
Published 20th Jul 2017
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20th Jul 2017 4:14am
Another very nicely written n sang song ...
You got skills my dear, keep it up. :)
You got skills my dear, keep it up. :)
20th Jul 2017 6:30am
I like it. nice lyrics and song verse. Keep working on that. You have some talent
20th Jul 2017 7:42pm
I like your lyrics
But release that voice from the gut the sun within you pulsate that shit implosion
Set fire to us incinerate with harmonic napalm
But release that voice from the gut the sun within you pulsate that shit implosion
Set fire to us incinerate with harmonic napalm
21st Jul 2017 5:23am
