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Re. 07.18.17-2
19th Jul 2017 3:00am
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19th Jul 2017 1:07pm
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19th Jul 2017 3:26pm
exactly...a vow is a determination, it only expires when the will to do so wilts. love this!!!
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14th Aug 2017 6:38pm
iTS INTERESTING HOW VOWS OF LOVE AND ADORATION ACCENTUATE SEX
THEY ALSO PROMISE PROTECTION FROM WANT ...THEY PROMISE KINDNESS ...THEY ARE PROMISES OF TENDERNESS... RESPECT EXCITEMENT... CARING.... SELFLESS SACRIFICE ...UNCONDITIONAL SINGULAR DEVOTION
VOWS ARE GRAND PROMISES BUT THERE BETRAYALS MOST OFTEN START INNOCENT AND SO VERY SMALL LIKE THE ANNOYED TONE OF VOICE ...THE ROLLING OF THE EYEBALLS IN DISAPPROVAL.....
THE CROSSING OF ARMS...SARCASM....BLAME ...IMAGINING FOR A MOMENT THE ARMS OF ANOTHER ...DIFFERENT WANTS AND NEEDS EMOTIONALLY SEXUALLY AND WHAT OF DAY TO DAY STRESSES...LACK OF FORGIVENESS...AND THE CRUELTY OF TEDIUM ....JUST TO MENTION A FEW ....IS NOT THE LIST LONG AND ARE THOSE CRUELTIES EVER ACCUMULATING ...ALL AND EACH A TEAR TO THE HEART UNTIL IN SPITE OF THE BEST INTENTIONS THE VOWS ARE REPLACED BY THE WEIGHT THAT BENDS THE RIDGE POLL TO BREAKING
ITS THOSE LITTLE INNOCENT BETRAYALS OF THE VOW WE ARE ALL VICTIMS OF THAT DESTROY LOVE ...WE ARE HUMAN ....LOVE YOURSELF BEAUTIFUL WOMAN
LEARNING TO LIVE WITH ANOTHER REQUIRES TO VERY WISE PEOPLE
WITH HARD ONE COMMUNICATION SKILLS AND A SIMILAR WAVELENGTH
i feel your heart
it haunts me deep
better be careful
love is steep
THEY ALSO PROMISE PROTECTION FROM WANT ...THEY PROMISE KINDNESS ...THEY ARE PROMISES OF TENDERNESS... RESPECT EXCITEMENT... CARING.... SELFLESS SACRIFICE ...UNCONDITIONAL SINGULAR DEVOTION
VOWS ARE GRAND PROMISES BUT THERE BETRAYALS MOST OFTEN START INNOCENT AND SO VERY SMALL LIKE THE ANNOYED TONE OF VOICE ...THE ROLLING OF THE EYEBALLS IN DISAPPROVAL.....
THE CROSSING OF ARMS...SARCASM....BLAME ...IMAGINING FOR A MOMENT THE ARMS OF ANOTHER ...DIFFERENT WANTS AND NEEDS EMOTIONALLY SEXUALLY AND WHAT OF DAY TO DAY STRESSES...LACK OF FORGIVENESS...AND THE CRUELTY OF TEDIUM ....JUST TO MENTION A FEW ....IS NOT THE LIST LONG AND ARE THOSE CRUELTIES EVER ACCUMULATING ...ALL AND EACH A TEAR TO THE HEART UNTIL IN SPITE OF THE BEST INTENTIONS THE VOWS ARE REPLACED BY THE WEIGHT THAT BENDS THE RIDGE POLL TO BREAKING
ITS THOSE LITTLE INNOCENT BETRAYALS OF THE VOW WE ARE ALL VICTIMS OF THAT DESTROY LOVE ...WE ARE HUMAN ....LOVE YOURSELF BEAUTIFUL WOMAN
LEARNING TO LIVE WITH ANOTHER REQUIRES TO VERY WISE PEOPLE
WITH HARD ONE COMMUNICATION SKILLS AND A SIMILAR WAVELENGTH
i feel your heart
it haunts me deep
better be careful
love is steep
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Re. 07.18.17-2
30th Jan 2018 10:07pm
This is a stark commentary on the state of many marriages. It is beautiful in it's utter sadness. Brava!
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Anonymous
19th Feb 2018 7:38pm
A perfectly constructed thought. I really enjoyed. Bravo! :)
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7th Mar 2019 8:32pm
A vow to me only has meaning if the individual has shown trustworthiness not only to themselves, but others around them. Just say it's lessons I have learned the hard way in life.
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2nd Jun 2019 3:19pm
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31st Dec 2019 00:44am
short,sweet, and to the point. it strikes a harsh truthful blow to the gut.well penned.
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10th May 2022 3:11am
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19th May 2022 3:14pm
A powerful expression. Vow remains a vow doesn't matter how we shattered and broken are.
Love,
KS
Love,
KS
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Re. 07.18.17-2
25th May 2022 2:14pm
A vow is a vow and vow remains the vow. There is nothing wrong with the vow.
The problem is with the person who take that vow and breaks that vow.
Love,
KS
The problem is with the person who take that vow and breaks that vow.
Love,
KS
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29th May 2023 1:14pm
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31st Jul 2023 12:17pm