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Drunk With Passion
Drunk with passion, wild and free
A young song with a harmony so absurd
Your nude body a sculpture in my mind
A gentle touch that will never break
All pain built in my body melts away
Impressions of a black death escapes
Turning into dust
Playing the original game
For a fool to love
A rigid thought of what life has been
Intense passion and a raw embrace
Drunk with passion, wild and free
A young song with a harmony so absurd
Your nude body a sculpture in my mind
A gentle touch that will never break
All pain built in my body melts away
Impressions of a black death escapes
Turning into dust
Playing the original game
For a fool to love
A rigid thought of what life has been
Intense passion and a raw embrace
Drunk with passion, wild and free
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Re. Drunk With Passion
18th Jul 2017 1:57pm
Gosh...this was dreamy n beautiful...
love the sense of a passionate heart n soul here
love the sense of a passionate heart n soul here
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18th Jul 2017 5:27pm
Re. Drunk With Passion
18th Jul 2017 2:14pm
Sweet imagery in a mixing bowl of young desires. Oh how I remember them well...
Nice read Rose!
JJ
Nice read Rose!
JJ
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19th Jul 2017 3:36pm
the write is excellent...fast and direct. if every day is wild and free, does that lessen the illusion of wild and free?
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Re. Drunk With Passion
19th Jul 2017 7:24pm
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Re. Drunk With Passion
Evocative piece. Favourite lines, for illustrating how intimate moments can be imprinted in memory:
Your nude body a sculpture in my mind
A gentle touch that will never break
(May be biased - I was naked, after bath, when I read this so it was touching to imagine it being said to me as a compliment. This line has inspired a poem I wrote today, posted in this section, titled "Your Body Is A Work of Art".)
Your nude body a sculpture in my mind
A gentle touch that will never break
(May be biased - I was naked, after bath, when I read this so it was touching to imagine it being said to me as a compliment. This line has inspired a poem I wrote today, posted in this section, titled "Your Body Is A Work of Art".)
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Re. Drunk With Passion
28th Jan 2018 1:10pm
its an art to compose erotica
w/o it being absurd
you have so many hearts won
great fun reading such indirect poetry
w/o it being absurd
you have so many hearts won
great fun reading such indirect poetry
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