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I Was Looking…
I was looking for a hit
I was looking for a fix
The darkest high
I'll ever know
I was looking for a... thing
So much trouble does it bring
Deeper
Than you'll ever know
I was looking for an answer
But the question is a cancer
Scars
I'll never show
I was waiting for a day
It's not up for display
A place
I'll never go
I said all the words
Here they're all unheard
What doesn't shine
Will never glow
Adrift upon the breeze
The flowers make me sneeze
Yeah...
That's just how it goes
© Indie Adams 2011
I was looking for a fix
The darkest high
I'll ever know
I was looking for a... thing
So much trouble does it bring
Deeper
Than you'll ever know
I was looking for an answer
But the question is a cancer
Scars
I'll never show
I was waiting for a day
It's not up for display
A place
I'll never go
I said all the words
Here they're all unheard
What doesn't shine
Will never glow
Adrift upon the breeze
The flowers make me sneeze
Yeah...
That's just how it goes
© Indie Adams 2011
Published 3rd Sep 2011
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Anonymous
3rd Sep 2011 12:26pm
I really liked this. I like it more because you never really work out what it is that you are looking for, so it has that bit of mystery about it.
Well written, easy read. Good job.
Well written, easy read. Good job.
3rd Sep 2011 12:37pm
I love how your writing has a certain level of mystique to them. Very impressive, and I also agree.. very easy read.
4th Sep 2011 1:17am
I love the darkness and mystery in your poetry.It is very well written and easy to understand.
5th Sep 2011 10:30am
I like the idea that my writing has mystique to it, and that it's accessible. Thanks. :)
6th Sep 2011 00:16am
5th Oct 2012 6:18pm
as the tumblr kids say
^ relevant
v. good, like the skewy rhyme, has an offbeat songlike quality, or like a beating headache- but cohesive too, circular. That's the best i can do. Don't change anything.
^ relevant
v. good, like the skewy rhyme, has an offbeat songlike quality, or like a beating headache- but cohesive too, circular. That's the best i can do. Don't change anything.
Anonymous
31st Mar 2013 2:03pm
Something deep dark and secretive about this.
Wondering what or how u started in DUP.
Awesome read though:)
Wondering what or how u started in DUP.
Awesome read though:)
10th Apr 2013 3:18am
I feel like we all have those hidden scars and those secrets and those words we have said that always go unheard. And the situation we are each in may differ, but the emotions are the same and your poem connects each of us on not simply a situational level but a deeply emotional level. Great work.
26th Feb 2024 00:17am
On the themes of nature, I loved how this lead down a path with an unexpected twist. Nicely done.
19th Mar 2024 4:16am
