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NEW SINS BORN
Purity fresh, sown by scorn
Stirred flesh
within soul's soil
Seeds
then spoil
Seven deadly sins are born
Stirred flesh
within soul's soil
Seeds
then spoil
Seven deadly sins are born
Published 13th Jul 2017
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14th Jul 2017 2:20pm
I like the idea of sin coming from spoiled seeds - thought provoking write :-)
14th Jul 2017 8:45pm
like david, i love the metaphor of seeds,
it's quite a visual of moral corruption; nourished, taking root & flourishing
a great write
it's quite a visual of moral corruption; nourished, taking root & flourishing
a great write
