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Rounds Hitting the Ground
As bullet rounds hit the ground.
Everybody will duck down.
The rounds that fly.
Someone has died.
All I hear is this right now.
That is rounds hitting the ground.
Everybody will duck down.
The rounds that fly.
Someone has died.
All I hear is this right now.
That is rounds hitting the ground.
Published 19th Jun 2017
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19th Jun 2017 3:17am
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25th Apr 2018 9:31am
Chilling, the sound of bullets hitting the ground or flesh will never ever quite, echoing forevermore. Written with powerful Raw grit creating terrifying imagery, love the steady flow of rhythm. Well done Kavik, much love deep respect,
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