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s c r e a m ii
buried yet alive
anticipation - the trance
seventeen moments
before the now
the taiga has come alive
deafening beats of high bass
time for cold fusion
for bodies of magma
sakatas fall silent
so does the forest
the scream
a sonic boom
he waited seventeen years
now back to ash
she knew where to find him
now
and beyond
anticipation - the trance
seventeen moments
before the now
the taiga has come alive
deafening beats of high bass
time for cold fusion
for bodies of magma
sakatas fall silent
so does the forest
the scream
a sonic boom
he waited seventeen years
now back to ash
she knew where to find him
now
and beyond
Published 17th Jun 2017
| Edited 19th Jun 2017
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i - ii not for shallow minds or short vision
even cold fusion can be erotic in nature
'til again in seventeen before death
deep thoughts
claps
even cold fusion can be erotic in nature
'til again in seventeen before death
deep thoughts
claps
comes a point in life when motivation is not quantity but quality.
:-) @ cold fusion can be erotic in nature.
deep is the perspective of a friend here.
appreciation is held close.
:-) @ cold fusion can be erotic in nature.
deep is the perspective of a friend here.
appreciation is held close.
14th Jun 2021 5:38am
'twas my first comment to you many fond moments ago.
Brood X now in full swing here in IN
Brood X now in full swing here in IN
14th Jun 2021 7:48pm
I’m in full respect of anybody who writes erotica in a subtle way. It’s such a skill that is so often overlooked, especially here.
I like the open-ended nature of the end of the poem. You wonder where it goes and that’s the sign of a good read for me. It pulls me to think beyond the story that is presented on the page.
I enjoyed this little read. Thank you for sharing.
-M
I like the open-ended nature of the end of the poem. You wonder where it goes and that’s the sign of a good read for me. It pulls me to think beyond the story that is presented on the page.
I enjoyed this little read. Thank you for sharing.
-M
