masochistic whore

take that PS! haha love the in-tenssse whoopin' sistah. now that is some dark pome..kick-ass pome.

thank you Walker I take as good as I give.. love Crim

I'll be the first to break you
My cum will be your mouthwash
You're my fucking cunt whore princess
Literary ass fuck begging for more

It's in public now

Bleed

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thank you Sadistic Poet for breathing the life back into me with your public backhand.. love you.. xx Brenda

"you bring the vodka
&I'll bring the devil"


who could resist such an offer?

Kick-ass poem. The epitome of a masochist, right there.

Respect

thank you Obsessed one for such a bad ass comment.. love Crim

This is fucking hard core hot !!

thank you dearest Ragnar so pleased you enjoyed :) love Crim

sex & violence, Crim,
the agony outdoes the dirty;
you brought it...

thank you most graciously John.. love Crim

a moment of silence for the amazingness  that is having your mouth used as a urinal.
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righty-oh
masochist stamp of approval all over this, brenda.
you had me squirming in my seat.
vodka and a change of nickers ltm
love ya lady
xxxxxx

thank you beautiful one I love & cherish your thoughts.. love you lady.. xx Brenda

"I have a pussy with teeth" > that line was a pleasant surprise (lol)

Love this one, but you know that already...

Damn lady, you're on a poetic roll lately... keep them coming!

Love, Duende

thank you beautiful Duende lol at that line :) love Brenda

Brenda.. you're truly brilliant.. this kicks ass on all levels.. love you..


















Dave

thank you my brother Dave.. I love you.. Brenda

Sometimes the devil is in the vodka...great piece

thank you Tim indeed.. love Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda is fired up and leaving an endless trail to clean up...words which wield cutting in and leaving blood dripping from that gorgeous mouth! My love, this is simply outstanding and I am grrrrrr'ing because I am unable to RL this right now...but it will be going in as soon as it can! I'm keeping a running tab for you and others that are must haves!

I love you deeply!

With all my love - Taryn xoxo

thank you my love I am so elated at your reaction to this write.. over the moon happy.. I love you passionately.. love Brenda

Well, this is certainly a combustible piece! And that was one helluva solid landing! Lovely Angel, bringing your fire to the party again, I see. Much love...

thank you lovely one for such a wonderful comment :)  

I love you lady..  

xo Crim

Jesus!  that was scary - or maybe I'm a wimp ?

thank you David no lol this was a very dark erotic ;)    
 
you gave me a giggle with your comment :)  
   
love Brenda

hot ! hot ! hot !

thank you most graciously..  

love Crimsin