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Leads
Truth leads to hate;
Try speaking the truth
Without being hated.
If you are not hated
you can’t be speaking
the or any truth
Lying leads to love
Try lying your ass off
Without being loved
If you’re not loved
You can’t be that
Good a liar
Published 10th Jun 2017
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2017 5:04am
i will say I am a shitty liar...thank gods it's not my forte...and damned proud of that to boot...this speaks volumes David!! I love when you do this to the mind!
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
11th Jun 2017 3:41am
Anonymous
10th Jun 2017 10:55am
well shite. content to be despised yup.
great write David
xo
great write David
xo
11th Jun 2017 3:43am
(LOL) love the shite comment :-) I agree the truth is not out there it's in here :-)
11th Jun 2017 00:13am
I would rather be hated for the Truth than liked for a lie. And ironically, I am! LOL!
The second half confused me, David.
"Lying leads to love
Try lying your ass off
Without being loved
If you’re not loved
You can’t be that
Good a liar"
I can't wrap my brain around this thought process. Those who truly Love us do so in Truth. That's not to say people don't lie to get what they want, e.g. - affection, money, power et al. Or, that people love a liar because they can't see through their bullshit.
The second half confused me, David.
"Lying leads to love
Try lying your ass off
Without being loved
If you’re not loved
You can’t be that
Good a liar"
I can't wrap my brain around this thought process. Those who truly Love us do so in Truth. That's not to say people don't lie to get what they want, e.g. - affection, money, power et al. Or, that people love a liar because they can't see through their bullshit.
11th Jun 2017 3:40am
well yet again you are right on the button - it is sad to say that many people receive a version of love by lying and not being totally honest. Love can be lost by being honest - some may say that this love is not real but we all have out own versions :-) thank you for the read and the wise words :-)
