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Unspoken
A compilation of sound; rustic windchimes
in a hot August breeze, a delicate vein of beauty
running straight through the center.
The ocean sighs, desperatly reaching for a sandy shore
only to embrace a few small grains. Such sorrow
as she pulls them like a lover, deep inside her.
That silence on the phone, when my soldier disconnects;
but he never says goodbye.
Music is sound poetry, rendered by instruments:
the plaintive mourn of the violin
blues from a trumpet's throat, when a sound has color
the jungle verbalizing, when a drum is attended
the riffs, feminine yet explicit, from my own guitar.
Each tone and fragment is captured, nothing escapes
And I know there is harmony in the song that love makes
As I wait to hear it.
(Artist unknown)
in a hot August breeze, a delicate vein of beauty
running straight through the center.
The ocean sighs, desperatly reaching for a sandy shore
only to embrace a few small grains. Such sorrow
as she pulls them like a lover, deep inside her.
That silence on the phone, when my soldier disconnects;
but he never says goodbye.
Music is sound poetry, rendered by instruments:
the plaintive mourn of the violin
blues from a trumpet's throat, when a sound has color
the jungle verbalizing, when a drum is attended
the riffs, feminine yet explicit, from my own guitar.
Each tone and fragment is captured, nothing escapes
And I know there is harmony in the song that love makes
As I wait to hear it.
(Artist unknown)
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Re. Unspoken
4th Jun 2017 9:13am
blissful sounds are their own language,
not restricted by borders or attitude;
& they resonate in your poetry, Kas...
not restricted by borders or attitude;
& they resonate in your poetry, Kas...
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Re: Re. Unspoken
4th Jun 2017 10:03am
Yes they are, aren't they? Bliss should not be restricted, but heard. It should be kept close. Thank you for such a beautiful comment, John...
Re. Unspoken
4th Jun 2017 1:30pm
"And I know there is harmony in the song that love makes
As I wait to hear it...mmm yea I know that's right Kas...another beautiful ink
n very hot pic... :)
As I wait to hear it...mmm yea I know that's right Kas...another beautiful ink
n very hot pic... :)
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Re: Re. Unspoken
8th Jun 2017 8:59am
Re. Unspoken
4th Jun 2017 1:59pm
but he never says goodbye
There are never goodbyes in Love; only continuation into the next time.
This is lively, Kas. The ebb / flow of the tide against granules of sand ... small moves, Ellie. Small moves.
There are never goodbyes in Love; only continuation into the next time.
This is lively, Kas. The ebb / flow of the tide against granules of sand ... small moves, Ellie. Small moves.
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Re: Re. Unspoken
17th Jun 2017 6:52am
Perhaps goodbyes just aren't necessary in love. Small moves indeed, thankyou, wise one...
Re. Unspoken
a passionate sense of melancholy wove throughout this write lovely Kasai..
beautiful..
love Crim
beautiful..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Unspoken
17th Jun 2017 6:54am
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2017 9:17pm
Sweet Kasai, swept away I was with the sound of the ocean as it foamed in a whisper on the shore while hearing the melancholy ache within the notes played...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. Unspoken
17th Jun 2017 7:03am
Even now, I hear that whisper. So glad you came to enjoy, sweet lady. My apologies for the slow response, not much time to enjoy the music these days...
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2017 1:51pm
Beautiful, simply gorgeous. With no goodbye the conversation is just paused, waiting to be picked up again later. I've often thought the same of music, I read somewhere that music is what emotion sounds like. Much enjoyed
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Re: Re. Unspoken
17th Jun 2017 7:08am
Goodbyes are so final. When love is involved, it becomes a constant. Music as emotion, a beautiful thought. Perhaps why it moves us so much. Thankyou for the lovely visit...
Re. Unspoken
6th Jun 2017 8:42pm
So beautiful...the feelings echoing out of the music puts my soul in a trance waiting patiently for each note to glide into my heart.
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Re: Re. Unspoken
17th Jun 2017 7:11am
I think music hits us deeply, so much feeling involved in every note. Perhaps it goes hand in hand with poetry, with art. Thankyou for the kind words, Tim...
Re. Unspoken
16th Jun 2017 8:31pm
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8th Aug 2017 1:20am
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