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For someone from long ago ....
Have you ever been
with someone? you just loved
the sound of their voice
it didn't even really matter
what they were talking about
you just knew, you never
wanted to give them
a reason to stop
with someone? you just loved
the sound of their voice
it didn't even really matter
what they were talking about
you just knew, you never
wanted to give them
a reason to stop
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Re. For someone from long ago ....
2nd Jun 2017 9:22pm
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3rd Jun 2017 1:36am
Thank you so much Tim for the read and lovely comments... always appreciated .. it was, yes
Re. For someone from long ago ....
2nd Jun 2017 10:51pm
I've meet people like this. But have not had enough time to choose. Like the style of this piece. Continue on curious to see what you come out with next.
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Re: Re. For someone from long ago ....
4th Jun 2017 8:11pm
Thank you so much Clearminded for the read and thoughtful comments...much appreciated. For taking for your RL .. humbled and honored
Re. For someone from long ago ....
3rd Jun 2017 2:15am
Yes; like their tone was calming or something. I had an art mentor like that once. Died long ago.
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Re: Re. For someone from long ago ....
4th Jun 2017 8:12pm
Thank you so much Ahavati for the read and thoughtful comments .. always welcome and appreciated x
Re. For someone from long ago ....
Anonymous
3rd Jun 2017 3:34am
Beautiful reminder of amazing feelings I think we have all had at some point.
Great write
Great write
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4th Jun 2017 8:12pm
Re. For someone from long ago ....
3rd Jun 2017 9:42am
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4th Jun 2017 8:13pm
Thank you so much SweetOblivion for the read and thoughtful comments .. always appreciated
Re. For someone from long ago ....
3rd Jun 2017 4:02pm
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4th Jun 2017 8:14pm
Thank you so much JohnFeddeler for the read and blissful comments.. always appreciated
Re. For someone from long ago ....
3rd Jun 2017 4:23pm
I understand this so well, I think there were several (but I can fall for a voice)
Great write, Jemac! Beautiful in its simplicity!
Great write, Jemac! Beautiful in its simplicity!
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Re: Re. For someone from long ago ....
4th Jun 2017 8:15pm
Thank you so much Duende for the read and thoughtful comments..always appreciated
Re. For someone from long ago ....
4th Jun 2017 1:38am
Yes I have experienced this unfortunately I started to listen to what she was saying - reality bites
excellent ink :-)
excellent ink :-)
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Re: Re. For someone from long ago ....
4th Jun 2017 8:18pm
Thank you so much David for the read and thoughtful comments... much appreciated.. and so sorry
Re. For someone from long ago ....
Anonymous
5th Jun 2017 11:26pm
My hands are laid closely to beating heart, literally.
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Re: Re. For someone from long ago ....
6th Jun 2017 1:32am
Thank you so much Splitsunsets for the read and lovely comments ... always appreciated
Re. For someone from long ago ....
Anonymous
9th Jun 2017 5:05pm
i really enjoyed that this was presented as a question. It was as if the writer was not sure themselves they even had. Is anyone ever sure? Do you need to be? I know of this confident feeling as it basically drove off a bluff.
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