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Escape

A lonely road leads to escape
tempting pills on her plate
she ate

Written by PoetryOnPurpose

Published 31st May 2017

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Re. Escape

31st May 2017 11:02pm

Love the simplicity.

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Re. Escape

2nd Jun 2017 4:39am

Yes, agree with Emmy. It's bleak & simple but the message says so much about the despair & mindset of this particular individual.

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Re. Escape

5th Jun 2017 3:11am

simple, yet despair-filled in 13 words

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