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River of ecstasy
How your words affect me...
Glace` cherry lips wet with saccharin indulgence,
I savor every ruminative appellation,
rolling them deliciously upon my indescreet tongue.
And those provocative little ellipses...
I feel them linger timidly at the small of my back.
So seductively they flow down, tracing the
lovely rise that beckons to a forbidden slpendor
of erogenous secrets.
I drape my silken flesh with scripted perversions,
wearing them like cashmere desire as each wicked sway of hips
leaves me breathless and trembling.
Would I dare to rock our little boat
on these turbulent waters?
I would cross my legs, be the temptress
of your chorus line; I would call you Mister.
Glace` cherry lips wet with saccharin indulgence,
I savor every ruminative appellation,
rolling them deliciously upon my indescreet tongue.
And those provocative little ellipses...
I feel them linger timidly at the small of my back.
So seductively they flow down, tracing the
lovely rise that beckons to a forbidden slpendor
of erogenous secrets.
I drape my silken flesh with scripted perversions,
wearing them like cashmere desire as each wicked sway of hips
leaves me breathless and trembling.
Would I dare to rock our little boat
on these turbulent waters?
I would cross my legs, be the temptress
of your chorus line; I would call you Mister.
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Re. River of ecstasy
29th May 2017 10:33am
sexy & devious, Kas;
the poetry & temptation rock, along with the boat...
the poetry & temptation rock, along with the boat...
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Re: Re. River of ecstasy
30th May 2017 5:22am
Ah yes, just as it should be. The boat will always rock for as long as that river flows. Thank you, John...
Re. River of ecstasy
29th May 2017 12:01pm
And as he becomes bolder and bolder. Just at the critical point, you step back and cross your legs: ‘See, what did I tell you! All men are beasts, all I wanted was affection, but all you are interested in is sex!’
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Re: Re. River of ecstasy
31st May 2017 1:12pm
Soooo, they are under sexual pressure, even though the Mister is an older man who have a satisfactory marriage or gracefully resigned to monogamy or celibacy, and she is paradoxically a temptress and a buddy in this cavalier platonic beautiful poetic extravaganza?!
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Re. River of ecstasy
29th May 2017 12:58pm
a most alluring piece of ink. Hypnotic in it's presentation. Oh how I would love to be baptized in your river
#misterm
#misterm
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Re: Re. River of ecstasy
31st May 2017 6:59am
Nice to see you, MrM, honored you've decided to keep this one. And I thank you for the lovely comment. Much appreciated...
Re. River of ecstasy
29th May 2017 1:05pm
it's all in the seduction beautiful Kasai you have sexy & coy laced through every line..
beautiful poetry..
love Crim
beautiful poetry..
love Crim
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Re: Re. River of ecstasy
31st May 2017 7:12am
Thank you, talented lady, that means a lot coming from you. I always enjoy your visits...
Re. River of ecstasy
29th May 2017 2:07pm
I would call you Mister
Such a provocative line to end with, Kas. There is more graceful seduction in a line such as this than all the penned nudity Words could provide.
It's the southern way, graceful and elegant.
Such a provocative line to end with, Kas. There is more graceful seduction in a line such as this than all the penned nudity Words could provide.
It's the southern way, graceful and elegant.
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Re: Re. River of ecstasy
31st May 2017 7:27am
Such a flattering comment, Ahavati; the southern way, so proper. Thanks for sharing your thoughts...
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29th May 2017 3:01pm
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Re. River of ecstasy
30th May 2017 5:19am
Kasai, this is beautiful. I loved every line, especially "Glace` cherry lips wet with saccharin indulgence," because I could picture the cherry lips. It is very sensual without being over the top. I guess what I am trying to say is that this piece is subtle. I love the way the piece ends because it leaves a bit of mystery.
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Re: Re. River of ecstasy
1st Jun 2017 4:34am
It's always nice to hear from you, eswaller, and what a flattering comment you've left. I'm so glad you enjoyed; Thank you much for the kind visit...
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30th May 2017 2:57pm
Re: Re. River of ecstasy
1st Jun 2017 4:36am
Glad to hear it, Poetik, thanks for dropping in to leave a few words, much appreciated...
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Anonymous
31st May 2017 4:39am
Sweet Kasai, that third stanza...stole my breath in it's elegant composition...as a whole, of course, the entire write is gorgeous but those lines...yeah...they got me....I always love visiting your pages...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. River of ecstasy
1st Jun 2017 4:40am
Such a sweet lady you are and those amazing comments always make me smile. Thank you so much, Taryn, love to see you visit my pages...