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Blood In The Ground
Perhaps poetry is dying
beneath this stagnated air
perhaps we’re all tangled
in this wave of fate
Tears of blood
smeared in purple hues
bruised and betrayed
by friends and poe
Skinned and hung
dark side of the moon
where gloom oversteps
blooming death next door
Even scarecrows hide
appalled by the night
and carnivores tongues
lap unfaithful light
Pious and hypocrites
knee sunk in muck
mocking the Word
Vein’d of true blood
Vigilant rains pound
cold clayed-Ground
demanding for seeds
planted in our hearts.
Written by
Lena-underneath
Published 28th May 2017
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Re. Blood In The Ground
28th May 2017 1:31am
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28th May 2017 8:46pm
Thank you papi! I don't put all my stuff here because it's not the same. But I know you have my back and I have yours.
Re. Blood In The Ground
28th May 2017 1:41am
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28th May 2017 8:48pm
I'm so glad I had an impact with this for you. I wanted to make others feel it.
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Anonymous
28th May 2017 8:38pm
sh**!!
Love ya ma Lena..is all I got,
ive speechlessly surrender
Love ya ma Lena..is all I got,
ive speechlessly surrender
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Re: Re. Blood In The Ground
28th May 2017 8:49pm
Your visit alone is an honor and speaks volumes. Gracias mamacita! ; )
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29th May 2017 11:01am
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30th May 2017 3:19pm
I don't have all the answers, but never stop writing. great to see you John
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29th May 2017 7:32pm
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30th May 2017 3:22pm
Wow Mr. Hades! Your appearance is an incredible honor for my first DARK write as I've been a fan of yours in and out of DU ; ) Thank you
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Anonymous
2nd Jun 2017 4:22am
Sexy Lena........what great ink......congrats on your very first dark write that tugs at the heart and soul.......deeply felt.......luv it...RL for me.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Blood In The Ground
19th Jun 2017 3:10pm
Thank you so much my luv! Honored by the RL. My first dark write and so glad it made an impact....hugs and kisses mamacita ; )
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4th Jun 2017 1:25pm
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19th Jun 2017 3:21pm
QUERIDA! it's so great to see you here! I always thought of poetry as positive or romantic. After learning so much more about it, I found it can also be heartbreaking, dark and erotic. For me, it can give someone therapy. For those who use it as a weapon, I find it's never worth reading or giving it attention. Besos mi amor
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20th Jun 2017 6:30pm
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20th Jun 2017 7:19pm
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10th Jul 2017 1:17am
Re. Blood In The Ground
Damn...this is a brilliant ink, may have dark
intent, but your talent is as bright as a shining star mami... very impressive spill! :)
intent, but your talent is as bright as a shining star mami... very impressive spill! :)
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5th Sep 2017 7:26pm
Thank you so much! It was my first dark write at a dark time and trying to express the frustration in an artful manner lol I appreciate your visit
Re. Blood In The Ground
7th Sep 2017 7:38am
Nicely written. It is a true dark poem with a tone seething anger just waiting to be released. Great job.
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Re: Re. Blood In The Ground
8th Sep 2017 3:03pm
Hello DevilsPoet, so nice of you to visit and thank you for the wonderful comment. I had to express the anger at the moment ; )
Re. Blood In The Ground
3rd Jan 2018 5:35am
First impression makes a lasting impression. Very nice, Lena, and I can't wait until you see the light. Then your pen will become even more powerful. Mark my words. This is not a criticism as your poem is wonderful, but a statement on what you will create beyond this as you shift gears.
David
David
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