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Depression
My heart feels sad
hanging heavy in its hollow
like a lump of lead
dragging my shoulders down
my head follows
I can only look at the ground.
hanging heavy in its hollow
like a lump of lead
dragging my shoulders down
my head follows
I can only look at the ground.
Published 26th May 2017
| Edited 2nd Apr 2018
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26th May 2017 5:42pm
What a despondent poem, sarahcate.
I felt the heaviness and weight through the words.
I felt the heaviness and weight through the words.
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22nd Jun 2017 10:29am
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2nd Jul 2017 6:29pm
Very visual, as if I can see your pain. Excellent conveying of distress. I deal with depression, I can understand.
