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Woman Of The First Clan
I cut off my legs
when I separated
myself from you
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the ones that let me
travel the mystical realm
in dream time
***
you are a clan woman
with great magic
***
I still feel you
quietly tapping
at my heart's door
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let us again run like wolves
through the badlands
careful not to disturb
the spirits that lie there
***
with stealth we go
I feel you
the power you wield
it quiets the beast in me
***
you gave me back my legs
so I can again hunt the night
woman of the first clan
it's I who thank you
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 24th May 2017
| Edited 25th May 2017
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Anonymous
24th May 2017 9:11pm
Beautiful one, I just had the most heartwarming image of you and your spirit wolf running wild through the night. Such incredible imagery you've brought to us. I would run beside you, given half a chance. Much love
24th May 2017 9:14pm
aw lovely one you've been running with this injured wolf protecting me from the pack because I was weak all along :) I love you.. love Crim
Anonymous
24th May 2017 9:27pm
Wolves, clans, Ragnar is intrigued !
24th May 2017 9:36pm
25th May 2017 1:05am
you gave me back my legs
so I can again hunt the night
woman of the first clan
it's I who thank you - - - - - - you know what's strange - I have never had a dream where both my legs were missing. In my dreams I walk, run, dance - everything physical is normal - weird huh?
so I can again hunt the night
woman of the first clan
it's I who thank you - - - - - - you know what's strange - I have never had a dream where both my legs were missing. In my dreams I walk, run, dance - everything physical is normal - weird huh?
25th May 2017 1:13am
it's because you walk the spirit world as you are in your new body David it's beautiful & real someday we will meet on the other side.. I'm not talking religion now just truth your spirit body is unharmed & kept safe waiting for you to shake off the mortal.. thank you I deeply appreciate your thoughts on this write & for sharing with me.. love Brenda
Anonymous
25th May 2017 3:57am
My Beautiful Brenda...this is such a beautiful, poignant write...we are all meant to come in and out of eachother's lives...the length of stay never known...the impact however, never to be forgotten...not when there is love...beautiful...
I love you my love...
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you my love...
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
25th May 2017 11:11am
thank you my love for your deep insight that you always share with me.. I did the right thing still it hurt only you know how much.. I love you deeply.. xo Brenda
25th May 2017 10:00am
25th May 2017 11:11am
This is an exhilarating write Crim, particularly these lines:
let us again run like wolves
through the badlands
careful not to disturb
the spirits that lie there
Both wild and polite when the lands are bad. Fine work!
let us again run like wolves
through the badlands
careful not to disturb
the spirits that lie there
Both wild and polite when the lands are bad. Fine work!
28th May 2017 00:37am
thank you dearest Sir Crow indeed you said it perfectly both wild & polite when the lands are bad :) love Crim
