deepundergroundpoetry.com

in came the sun
a spiritual change
has come over me
I've tried to hide it
I can't drink anymore
it does nothing for me
somewhere along the way
the sun eclipsed the moon
within my soul
the shadows withdrew
& tiny rays of hope
began to grow
I'm afraid I have to be honest
I wonder who this person is
living in my skin
think to myself will I be able to write
if not about the darkness
someone has stripped me of my armor
I'm left naked & vulnerable
I've left clues to my new nature
laced in my writes
desolation no longer holds the power
it once did in my poetry
it no longer rings true
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 13
reading list entries 2
comments 18
reads 934
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. in came the sun
23rd May 2017 7:30pm
a truly spiritual write and what an instantly de-stressing picture to accompany. couldn't be mo happier sistah!
1

Re: Re. in came the sun
23rd May 2017 9:50pm
Re. in came the sun
Anonymous
23rd May 2017 7:43pm
I always tend to believe that as long as you're true to yourself, the words will always be beautiful. And I've seen the radiance of your heart glowing through many of your writes. I, for one, look forward to seeing where you take us. Beautiful write, sweet lady. Much love

1

Re: Re. in came the sun
23rd May 2017 9:52pm
thank you lovely one I think I'm just finding a balance between the dark and the light.. finding it a bit unsettling at the moment.. though I know I will find my way.. love you lady :) xo Crim
Re. in came the sun
23rd May 2017 8:05pm
Welcome to the light side : )) ...light or dark a glow hovers over your words 🙂
1

Re: Re. in came the sun
23rd May 2017 9:53pm
Re. in came the sun
Anonymous
23rd May 2017 8:22pm
What an enlightened piece .

1

Re: Re. in came the sun
23rd May 2017 9:53pm
Re. in came the sun
Crimsin, this is a beautifully written piece. It is full of light and hope. It brings something refreshing and a lot of optimism. I can feel the change you are going through. I love this piece so much. I cannot say anything negative about this piece (I really love it that much). Lots of love and hugs to you Crimsin. Thanks for sharing this deeply personal and reflective piece. P.S. I really love the title and image to go with it (very fitting for the subject matter).
1

Re: Re. in came the sun
23rd May 2017 11:15pm
thank you beautiful Eswaller for embracing this side of me it's very different from what I usually write.. I'm trying to get comfortable in the sun being a creature of the shadows for long.. you've made my day dear one :) love Crimsin
Re. in came the sun
Anonymous
24th May 2017 00:25am
<< post removed >>

Re: Re. in came the sun
24th May 2017 1:20am
thank you Cinnamon most graciously I just hope I can get used to the sun having been in the shadows so long.. love Crim
Re. in came the sun
25th May 2017 00:42am
what a very brave and honest reflection - I am so glad you shared it and hope it will always be true :-)
your skills as a poet will not be diminished :-)
sending more hugs :-)
your skills as a poet will not be diminished :-)
sending more hugs :-)
1

Re: Re. in came the sun
25th May 2017 11:00am
thank you dearest David for showing me love on this write & for the encouraging words.. love Brenda
Re. in came the sun
Anonymous
25th May 2017 3:40am
My Beautiful Brenda, whether you write with a shadow lingering above you or rays shining through the clouds, you are always captivating...sharing with us all that is you and I personally know what a most beautiful experience that is...forever enchanted by you my love.
I love you deeply!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you deeply!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo

1

Re: Re. in came the sun
25th May 2017 11:01am
thank you my love for such a beautiful comment you always embrace the dark and light in me for that & many reasons I cherish you.. I love you so much! xo Brenda
Re. in came the sun
Anonymous
26th May 2017 1:17am
Brenda.. our journey's take us in different directions.. being clean, doesn't mean you should doubt yourself... your gift is not, so simply defined by using or not.. passion is the root, of writing.. you're a step ahead of me.. i haven't accepted that yet.. hopefully some day i do.. much power and respect my sister.. i love you..
Dave
Dave

1

Re: Re. in came the sun
28th May 2017 00:33am
thank you Dave for such an insightful comment I'm just afraid who am I if not the tormented one you know? I love you so much my brother.. xo Brenda