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moon is alight
crispy cold nite
not matters the frost bite
your company for me
has set the moon alight!
stay with me
say no words
enjoy the sight
beautiful night
not matters the frost bite
your company for me
has set the moon alight!
stay with me
say no words
enjoy the sight
beautiful night
Published 12th May 2017
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12th May 2017 1:42pm
thank you C White Junior! i wanted to say many things in few words, sometimes it is better, if we just experience something beautiful together including the togetherness of someone so dear.
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Anonymous
18th May 2017 9:22am
I'm a massive fan of Komachi and this made me think of her a little, I really like short pieces like this that express so much in so few line, the atmosphere you create in this piece is immediate and strong.
Great write
Ben
Great write
Ben
18th May 2017 9:32am
ma brotha! ya paying so much ta me is my fortune. ya have such sweet sight and eye. a love poem a wrote with nothin but intensity which did not had to mean many words. ya saw that, im a happy man,. thanks a million ma pal. love ya art.
