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all sentimentality aside, go play in the niagara
she listens to you
breathing ragged
through your
teeth
until she's satisfied
you'll throw
no more
frayed
life-lines
(they weren't
to save
her)
and then
snip.
Published 27th Aug 2011
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1st Sep 2011 5:35am
this is quite the work of art. i have a few different interpretations of it.given your chosen field i am leaning towards medical.
great stuff mike.
great stuff mike.
1st Sep 2011 6:32am
Haha, it means whatever you want it to mean, I suppose. That wasn't necessarily what I was writing about, but hearing others' interpretations of my work is very interesting to me. Thanks for the read and comment.
2nd Sep 2011 8:43pm
3rd Sep 2011 5:24am
