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blue
you cut the breath from me
& looked on in wonder
as I turned blue
without knowledge
you still held the knife
in your hand
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Re. blue
10th May 2017 5:48pm
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11th May 2017 4:05am
Re. blue
Anonymous
10th May 2017 6:20pm
Sometimes harm is done without intention or realization. And sometimes it isn't. The pain still hurts. Needed few words to express this as perfectly as you did
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11th May 2017 4:05am
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Anonymous
10th May 2017 6:27pm
I don't like saying, but this is one of your better writes. perhaps it's because it's different. or because you've captured a novel in a few lines
either way, good stuff
either way, good stuff
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11th May 2017 4:06am
Re. blue
10th May 2017 8:39pm
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11th May 2017 4:07am
Re. blue
10th May 2017 10:05pm
So much as been said in so few words. Captivating to say the least.
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11th May 2017 4:08am
Re. blue
11th May 2017 2:36pm
Few words yet so powerful. The picture only intensifies the raw emotion. Love you mind.
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11th May 2017 3:35pm
Re. blue
11th May 2017 10:28pm
a punch in the guts of a poem; packs real power - I could feel the tenseness and fear :-)
brilliant - hugs -David :-)
brilliant - hugs -David :-)
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Re: Re. blue
11th May 2017 10:34pm
thank you David indeed a lot of pain in this one.. hugs you back :) love Brenda
Re. blue
Anonymous
17th May 2017 6:14am
Brenda.. simply brilliant..
Dave
Dave
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18th May 2017 00:15am