little one

So so beautiful dear. I am reading The Pillars of the Earth right now and this ties in perfectly with the beginning...love it

thank you graciously Tim I Googled the book it looks very interesting :) I deeply appreciated you embracing this write.. love Brenda

This sounds like an ode the lovely Venus
as Jupiter awaits entry....
but my head is all over the place presently. lol
I think it's beautiful, forgive me taking this interpretation
away with me to cherish.
lovely work, dear Brenda xo

thank you lovely Miki I adore your interpretation of this write I deeply appreciate you gifting me today with such thoughts :) love Brenda

I thought I had commented on this, but . . . eh . . .
There is no warrior can compete with a mother's
love for, and passionate defender of her little one.
Nothing, I'm saying. To threaten a child is to
unleash a mother's wrath, and that isn't a smart thing to do.

thank you Jerry I love your thoughts on this write yes I fiercely guard her new soul poetically speaking :) love Brenda

Sorry,  I just found out this poem was about your inner child. I blew it, never thought that, my comments must have given you a laugh or two.  Heh.Heh

aw no way Jerry :) I love it because I am fiercely protective over her in the way a mamma would be.. love Brenda

wonderful write Brenda - bravo
Pregnant with possibilities
Ripe with defiance

thank you dearest Whale for a most gracious comment.. love Brenda :)

I love that this could be left to interpretation by the reader.  Such a beautifully soothing piece.  To me it reads birthing of inner child and new beginnings.  But that would be my own perspective.  Regardless of intention, this is a lovely write, dark angel

thank you lovely one yes I wanted each person to take from it what they would.. you have a keen understanding yes it's my inner child I am speaking of :) love Crim

I love the word pictures...

thank you most kindly.. love Crim

cleverly ambiguous made me think of the discovery of an inner child held back and almost forgotten carefully released. I recognise this process :-)

excellent ink :-)

thank you David it is about birthing my inner little one into this world and allowing people to hear her.. love Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda....this I just don't have words...I am left speechless other than to tell you how much I love you...

Love Taryn xoxo

thank you my love for always embracing the innocence in me :) I love you.. xo Brenda

Brenda.. this is above and beyond brilliant..









Dave

thank you Dave for showing me love on this write.. love you my brother.. xo Brenda