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Riptide
Countless times
I've drowned
in her eyes
Now I find myself
gulping down
spring fresh air
Longing once more
for sweet
suffocation
Published 3rd May 2017
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8th May 2017 3:43pm
8th May 2017 3:59pm
Thanks! I've always thought the phrase 'drowning in someone's eyes' was vaguely sinister but also wildly romantic, and wanted to expand on that :)
6th Nov 2017 10:35pm
22nd Jul 2022 4:11pm
I got two interpretations:
1. An authoritative or person you respect / admire. You feel you are not living up to their expectations.
2. Cunnilingus - the more likely of the two.
1. An authoritative or person you respect / admire. You feel you are not living up to their expectations.
2. Cunnilingus - the more likely of the two.
