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Twilight
Twilight sneaks in and pulls
me closer to the edge
where she waits
in all her splendor
gleaming in her element
in all her safety
those ruby red orbs
slipping off into tomorrow
guiding me off to view her pleasure
still
I walk slowly along the surf
me closer to the edge
where she waits
in all her splendor
gleaming in her element
in all her safety
those ruby red orbs
slipping off into tomorrow
guiding me off to view her pleasure
still
I walk slowly along the surf
Published 3rd May 2017
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Anonymous
3rd May 2017 3:07am
Absolutely gorgeous!
How easily those few lines transport the mind to far away places where the weight of the world is non-existent.
How easily those few lines transport the mind to far away places where the weight of the world is non-existent.
3rd May 2017 3:19am
Anonymous
3rd May 2017 8:10am
Ahh..twilight on the surf
Stop putting ideas in my head :)
Excellent pen. Much enjoyed
Stop putting ideas in my head :)
Excellent pen. Much enjoyed
3rd May 2017 7:53pm
Anonymous
3rd May 2017 2:22pm
You have a gift for transporting to beautiful imagery. Like a much needed reprieve from the storms of day to day. Much enjoyed
3rd May 2017 7:54pm
3rd May 2017 3:14pm
Tim breathtakingly beautiful this write washed over me in lovely waves..
love Crim
love Crim
3rd May 2017 7:55pm
