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Shards
When you broke me
it felt like millions
of pieces
of unmirrored glass
violent
sharp
scarring
cutting out my soul
the one
you used
to love
it felt like millions
of pieces
of unmirrored glass
violent
sharp
scarring
cutting out my soul
the one
you used
to love
Published 30th Apr 2017
| Edited 2nd Feb 2024
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1st May 2017 6:45am
I love this and I can feel the hurt. I feel like shards of glass like this piece demonstrates so clearly and wonderfully.
2nd May 2017 1:18pm
Thanks honey. Sometimes life comes with a lil pain/hurt. I try not to dwell. <3
I felt the pain and suffering in this one, coupled with the rising of rage :-)
excellent short and to the point / got my grey matter sparking :-)
excellent short and to the point / got my grey matter sparking :-)
3rd May 2017 2:35am
