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Dark of the moon
As iron is eaten away by rust, so too are the passionate,
consumed by our own mixture of madness.
I see ravishment reflected in the ancient patina of a silver chalice
and I open my mouth, eager to drink.
My lover will taste the acrid grapes crushed by our kisses.
Those of us that see with our own eyes,
feel with our own beating hearts; we become desire
and the melancholy dance of depravity
burns a desperate shade of rapture.
In our Cimmeria, where the light is forbidden,
it burns as inscrutably as the dark side of the moon.
We fall into the spell of poetry, music,
and the wild arrogance of our sex;
after the storm, we are all that is necessary of love -
naked and unfinished.
consumed by our own mixture of madness.
I see ravishment reflected in the ancient patina of a silver chalice
and I open my mouth, eager to drink.
My lover will taste the acrid grapes crushed by our kisses.
Those of us that see with our own eyes,
feel with our own beating hearts; we become desire
and the melancholy dance of depravity
burns a desperate shade of rapture.
In our Cimmeria, where the light is forbidden,
it burns as inscrutably as the dark side of the moon.
We fall into the spell of poetry, music,
and the wild arrogance of our sex;
after the storm, we are all that is necessary of love -
naked and unfinished.
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Re. Dark of the moon
27th Apr 2017 12:06pm
beautiful, Kas, if the moon's dark side is a haven for lovers,
we'll bring the poetry & the music...
we'll bring the poetry & the music...
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27th Apr 2017 12:35pm
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27th Apr 2017 3:10pm
There is beauty in darkness that you have skillfully made transparent in this unique write. Well done.
- Void
- Void
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30th Apr 2017 3:17am
The darkness is a beautiful place, it's just a little harder to see. Thank you for the great comment, so kind of you to visit...
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Anonymous
27th Apr 2017 5:35pm
You capture such beautiful imagery with your words. And then that final stanza...absolutely breathtaking and so true.
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29th Apr 2017 2:19am
I kept rereading those first two lines... the comparison you made is amazing...
You described the madness of love so well, I can keep telling you this: you have a beautiful pen!
You described the madness of love so well, I can keep telling you this: you have a beautiful pen!
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Anonymous
21st May 2017 7:33pm
Sweet Kasai, those first two lines hit with such a truthful bang...and you end this piece with the same impact...the dark side of the moon has shed the most light....because we have taken from it to live...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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27th May 2017 00:10am
Indeed, and she keeps every secret hidden. Thank you so much, dear lady, for another amazing visit to my pages...