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Forgetful Ghost
In pieces
Cracking
Shattered
Dead shards
Death in breeze
She left again
Love is afloat
Suicidal walls
Lonely rot
Love is long,
long forgot.
Cracking
Shattered
Dead shards
Death in breeze
She left again
Love is afloat
Suicidal walls
Lonely rot
Love is long,
long forgot.
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Re. Forgetful Ghost
21st Apr 2017 11:25am
Cryptic and captivating work my bro! So much to see/observe/absorb here mate! Pretty sure I'll be coming back to this one! Well done Bro Anon!!
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Re: Re. Forgetful Ghost
21st Apr 2017 11:29am
Thank you, kind Sir! I am glad you enjoyed it so much. Always an honor to have to stop by! ~anonshadow😏
Re: Re. Forgetful Ghost
22nd Apr 2017 2:24am
Amen to that, one of my favorite quotes. Thank you very much for stopping by, I truly appreciate it, honored to have you read me. ~anonshadow😏
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Re: Re. Forgetful Ghost
22nd Apr 2017 12:42pm
Perfect is a strong word, I am glad you feel that way. I appreciate you for the kind words and taking the time to stop by! ~anonshadow😏
Re. Forgetful Ghost
22nd Apr 2017 6:27pm
Re: Re. Forgetful Ghost
22nd Apr 2017 10:32pm
Glad to hear, Grace. Always appreciate your great encouragement!:) ~anonshadow😏
Re. Forgetful Ghost
22nd Apr 2017 9:28pm
Re: Re. Forgetful Ghost
22nd Apr 2017 10:34pm
Really glad you enjoyed it, I appreciate you stopping by for a read and leaving your thoughts! ~anonshadow😏
Re. Forgetful Ghost
24th Apr 2017 4:32pm
Wow. Absolutely gorgeous and definitely reflects my feelings lately. Because love blows goats. Sorry that's my current saying. But packs a powerful message in a short space. The mark of a true gift. Excellent.
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Re: Re. Forgetful Ghost
25th Apr 2017 2:31am
Thank you very much for the read, I appreciate you for stopping by, always a welcome sight. ~anonshadow😏
Re. Forgetful Ghost
Anonymous
1st May 2017 9:51am
What an enormous glassily shard, into my heart it pierced. Breath taken
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Re: Re. Forgetful Ghost
1st May 2017 11:19am
My, what a poetic comment, I thank you for that:) Thanks for reading! ~anonshadow