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Gunmetal love letters
You must have held me closely lastnite, sweet John,
those hands, those roaming hands, touching me in all the places
a lover needs to touch. I woke up thinking of you, so unbelievably wet
that I had to change. You made a mess of me; a beautiful mess.
I didn't want to get up, but just revel in the closeness of 'us.'
It rains today, not quite light, not quite dark,
but somewhere in between. We dance around blurred edges,
gunmetal gray clouds, a reflection of my eyes.
Days like this are made for lovers, made for those who thrive
in this chiaroscuro moondance. We glide upon our liquid nudity
as that thin line between the blacks and the whites
becomes invisible in the mist of a weeping sky.
I want to impart the riffs of the rain from my guitar
like silver bullets, I want to paint hardcore sex
on my canvas in the shade of a sunset gallows,
I want to kiss you so hard it hurts both of us
and let that be reason enough to cry...
those hands, those roaming hands, touching me in all the places
a lover needs to touch. I woke up thinking of you, so unbelievably wet
that I had to change. You made a mess of me; a beautiful mess.
I didn't want to get up, but just revel in the closeness of 'us.'
It rains today, not quite light, not quite dark,
but somewhere in between. We dance around blurred edges,
gunmetal gray clouds, a reflection of my eyes.
Days like this are made for lovers, made for those who thrive
in this chiaroscuro moondance. We glide upon our liquid nudity
as that thin line between the blacks and the whites
becomes invisible in the mist of a weeping sky.
I want to impart the riffs of the rain from my guitar
like silver bullets, I want to paint hardcore sex
on my canvas in the shade of a sunset gallows,
I want to kiss you so hard it hurts both of us
and let that be reason enough to cry...
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Re. Gunmetal love letters
19th Apr 2017 9:25am
listening to your guitar, Kas, sultry like the rain
lingering in the lush landscapes of your paintings
poetry & music for stormy days & nights...
lingering in the lush landscapes of your paintings
poetry & music for stormy days & nights...
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19th Apr 2017 10:12am
Somewhere, beneath the rhythym of falling rain, music and poetry live side by side along with the sound of love letters in the rain. Thank you, John...
Re. Gunmetal love letters
19th Apr 2017 9:45am
lovely Kasai I absolutely love that you were so open about the way you feel sexually towards John..
this is both hardcore sex and breathtaking imagery..
love Crim
this is both hardcore sex and breathtaking imagery..
love Crim
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20th Apr 2017 5:50am
Somewhere, deep in the heart of a poet, music is heard and when we put it in ink we bear a part of us unseen. Wide open and unashamed. Thank you, dear Crimsin, for being my first brave comment...
Re. Gunmetal love letters
19th Apr 2017 10:20am
Goddamn Kasai, this beautiful!!! But so too is that woman in the pic.! lol loved it completely... :)
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20th Apr 2017 5:53am
Isn't she gorgeous? Just as bare as a love letter. Thank you much, Pm, appreciate the visit...
Re. Gunmetal love letters
19th Apr 2017 2:11pm
Wow Kasai, you've taken some bold steps in revealing your admiration of John...
I can only admire you for that! You (both) make us part of your beautiful and intimate journey. It's special and rare and not for everyone and as a humble bystander I just read... and become speechess...
I can only admire you for that! You (both) make us part of your beautiful and intimate journey. It's special and rare and not for everyone and as a humble bystander I just read... and become speechess...
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20th Apr 2017 6:03am
It makes us human, the way we express, the way we write. And every ounce of emotion that we put in to it is in our true nature. Beautiful things should never be hidden. Thank you, Duende, your comment means much...
Re. Gunmetal love letters
19th Apr 2017 6:03pm
....absolutely sizzles. Deeply heartfelt. (as is a very gunmetal grey day here as well) Extremely well versed and as beautifully vivid as your companion illustration. I am in love with this ink 🙂
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20th Apr 2017 6:15am
Thanks for the visit, MrM, and for keeping this as well. There's something so poetic about a love letter and bearing one's deeper self, I just couldn't resist. Truly appreciate the kind words...
Re. Gunmetal love letters
A captivating and aesthetic formula you have brewed.
I adore a write capable of provoking intense imagery, it is the magic of words. Images... have been provoked.
Excellent.
I adore a write capable of provoking intense imagery, it is the magic of words. Images... have been provoked.
Excellent.
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Re: Re. Gunmetal love letters
20th Apr 2017 6:50am
That intensity poetry is capable of; exactly as it should be. It's right there, if only we dig deep enough. Honoured you've kept this one and I thank you for the great comment...
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Anonymous
21st Apr 2017 11:50pm
I am new here, and this is the second piece I have fallen upon. Whilst I'm unfamiliar with the history, I believe it was a beautiful entry point for me into following this love story. The imagery was superb, I was swept away...
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Re: Re. Gunmetal love letters
22nd Apr 2017 9:51am
It's great to see new faces; welcome. Honored to be your second read and so glad to hear you enjoyed. Thanks so much for commenting, I'll be sure to return the favor...
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Anonymous
21st May 2017 7:22pm
Sweet Kasai, so many captivating lines in this...the art you create allows us to ache and long with you...beauty can indeed come from sadness...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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