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i cannot promise you
that I'd stay the same
for I am a human
and erring(aka fucking up)
is inherent in me
I promise you Love
at times unconditional
and above and far beyond
love for self(yes, hard it may be to confess- it does exist)
this confession
is as brutal
for me
as it is
certainly
for you
I promise
co-existence
and freedom
of
and
from
expectations
that only
I can promise
for sure
no
it is not
my job
to mold you
nor is it
yours
to mold me
I promise
to hold you
regardless
your promise
to hold me
disregard
the false niceties
or sweet nothings
of prior
when you saw
the universe glow
in my eyes
it was a mirage
the glow
was but
a reflection
of your soul
© KDAmB 2017. All rights reserved.
Author's Note:- an excerpt from a piece that's never to be published. Above is the self explanatory scene between two troubled souls.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. i cannot promise you
16th Apr 2017 9:34pm
This is AWESOME, Birdman! Right on! I shot a hippie wedding a couple of years ago, and this reminds me of their vows reflecting the moment, and only what they knew they could promise throughout an ever-changing future.
They got married barefoot on a rock in a creek, and everyone wore tie dye and flowers in their hair. It was stunning. I swore right then its the ONLY way I'd EVER marry again.
This is from such a place of wise Love.
They got married barefoot on a rock in a creek, and everyone wore tie dye and flowers in their hair. It was stunning. I swore right then its the ONLY way I'd EVER marry again.
This is from such a place of wise Love.
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Re: Re. i cannot promise you
19th Apr 2017 11:50pm
Welcome Sage One!
Once again! I thank you for your generous appreciation dear respected friend.
Well, I reckon, lucky indeed were the couple to be shot by a talent like you. They, to me seem as the in-touch with reality folks hence the vows.
Well, have no other view than complete agreement with you and my Friend LadyRain below re only way to get wed.
May be it was their karma that it was you who ended up taking the snaps!!
Thank you once again Sage One!
Kind regards
KDAmB
Once again! I thank you for your generous appreciation dear respected friend.
Well, I reckon, lucky indeed were the couple to be shot by a talent like you. They, to me seem as the in-touch with reality folks hence the vows.
Well, have no other view than complete agreement with you and my Friend LadyRain below re only way to get wed.
May be it was their karma that it was you who ended up taking the snaps!!
Thank you once again Sage One!
Kind regards
KDAmB
Re. i cannot promise you
17th Apr 2017 3:14am
This is so utterly beautiful! I never understood why people would get married and make these 'stupid' vows... this is realistic and that's what love/marriage is about... it's not always pretty... it's not always easy...
Great write, my friend!
Great write, my friend!
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Re: Re. i cannot promise you
19th Apr 2017 11:54pm
Awwe! Thank You my friend! I reckon beuatiful is your perspective. I thank You once again for your visit and awesome feedback dear Duende!
Yes, I reckon it is about time we also focus on what we cannot promise rather than just some unrealistic promises which we know we can't keep or are not possible. About time we faced our truths I reckon.
Thank you once again dear friend for your generous compliments.
regards
KDAmB
Yes, I reckon it is about time we also focus on what we cannot promise rather than just some unrealistic promises which we know we can't keep or are not possible. About time we faced our truths I reckon.
Thank you once again dear friend for your generous compliments.
regards
KDAmB
Re. i cannot promise you
Anonymous
17th Apr 2017 11:47pm
Perhaps the rate of divorce
would be minimal
if we all concurred to such
un`promises promised;
a great interpretation ...
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Re: Re. i cannot promise you
20th Apr 2017 00:00am
If it stops just one 'unnecessary' divorce My honored poet then I lived a worthy life, let alone my pen.
As I've mentioned above to our dear friend Duende- about time we focused on what we cannot (realistically) promise and keep rather than on what we vow(and deep in our hearts know) and cannot keep.
My amazing friend I welcome your visit immensely and your feedback means a lot!
Cheers!
KDAmB
As I've mentioned above to our dear friend Duende- about time we focused on what we cannot (realistically) promise and keep rather than on what we vow(and deep in our hearts know) and cannot keep.
My amazing friend I welcome your visit immensely and your feedback means a lot!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. i cannot promise you
18th Apr 2017 2:15am
I’m with Ahavati. Strip me black and chuck me in rainbow tie dye, honesty like this I could believe in. If I’m ever mad enough gonna plagiarize the hell out of this, OK? ~ an Erring Ceremony :)
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Re: Re. i cannot promise you
OK? well- there won't be any plagiarism if you pay the licensing fee :-) [evil greedy grin]
Ever mad enough? aren't you a human? yes Erring ceremony-well that literally sent me off from my chair and onto the floor laughing- as to what I called it in reality, in the brackets in the poem.
Most important thing to me is to see you at my page Meghavati! I welcome your presence and awesome feedback immensely.
well,trust me you are human with a mad man as friend. and as they say GMTA
Ever mad enough? aren't you a human? yes Erring ceremony-well that literally sent me off from my chair and onto the floor laughing- as to what I called it in reality, in the brackets in the poem.
Most important thing to me is to see you at my page Meghavati! I welcome your presence and awesome feedback immensely.
well,trust me you are human with a mad man as friend. and as they say GMTA
Re. i cannot promise you
20th Apr 2017 7:20am
Freedom to be because nothing compares to being just you... yeah you put freedom and love on the right track my friend. Nothing beats unconditional free love. Love the flow, the liberty, and the honesty. this is a piece to remember and hold on to.thanks for sharing.
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Re: Re. i cannot promise you
Welcome dear friend!
Thank You for your deep and insightful feedback. I am truly humbled by your appreciation and RL add. Thank You sincerely, once again.
Glad my scribble conveyed some my thoughts. Love, unfortunately, in real life, binds and bounds, but, is it true love then?
Much obliged by the compliments.
Kind regards
KDAmB
Thank You for your deep and insightful feedback. I am truly humbled by your appreciation and RL add. Thank You sincerely, once again.
Glad my scribble conveyed some my thoughts. Love, unfortunately, in real life, binds and bounds, but, is it true love then?
Much obliged by the compliments.
Kind regards
KDAmB
Re. i cannot promise you
21st Apr 2017 1:41pm
Oh, I love this! And such a beautiful end to a deeply honest write.
I'm sure this is what I meant when I said all those more traditional words....
Keeping this one on my shelf. :)
k
I'm sure this is what I meant when I said all those more traditional words....
Keeping this one on my shelf. :)
k
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Re: Re. i cannot promise you
21st Apr 2017 3:35pm
Welcome Dear friend K!
I thank You for the visit and honor of RL add. Elated I am you liked the scribble. Honesty, I believe is all everyone seeks regardless whether they practice or not, I say why promise when can't practise! Life would be so much easy if we stay brutally honest.
I thank You once again for the compliment and visit!
kind regards
KDAmB
I thank You for the visit and honor of RL add. Elated I am you liked the scribble. Honesty, I believe is all everyone seeks regardless whether they practice or not, I say why promise when can't practise! Life would be so much easy if we stay brutally honest.
I thank You once again for the compliment and visit!
kind regards
KDAmB
Re. i cannot promise you
21st Apr 2017 10:22pm
I'm glad I stumbled into the fictional prose section and across this work of yours.
I'm not much for critiquing or analyzing, but, I know what I like.
Beautiful words.
Thank you KDAmB
I'm not much for critiquing or analyzing, but, I know what I like.
Beautiful words.
Thank you KDAmB
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Re: Re. i cannot promise you
Welcome dear friend FD! ☺
I thank you sincerely for your visit and kind appreciation. I am glad mate, you liked the scribble. Welcome to DU! ☺
Kind regards
KDAmB
I thank you sincerely for your visit and kind appreciation. I am glad mate, you liked the scribble. Welcome to DU! ☺
Kind regards
KDAmB