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Born Intuitive
Born intuitive,
Is to be the worst.
You catch it in the gaze,
In the mellow face play,
The actions laid,
You find it all about.
The quiet reveals it most.
The less words spoken,
The more has been said.
It brings about these questions,
That are left with such few answers.
I feel it instead of hearing it.
The vibe-not the tone.
The one that creates the thoughts that lift and propel
When you’re alone.
It’s the quiet that gets you,
It’s the quiet that gets me.
-JMR
Is to be the worst.
You catch it in the gaze,
In the mellow face play,
The actions laid,
You find it all about.
The quiet reveals it most.
The less words spoken,
The more has been said.
It brings about these questions,
That are left with such few answers.
I feel it instead of hearing it.
The vibe-not the tone.
The one that creates the thoughts that lift and propel
When you’re alone.
It’s the quiet that gets you,
It’s the quiet that gets me.
-JMR
Published 15th Apr 2017
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15th Apr 2017 1:36pm
Excellent write. I've often wondered if it was a gift or curse, Rained on One.
I feel it instead of hearing it.
The vibe-not the tone.
And it's never wrong, unless you think about it; then it becomes what you make it. So I 'spose it's a blessing Spiritually and a curse physically....being emotion follows thought. But, feeling, well, that precedes it all.
I feel it instead of hearing it.
The vibe-not the tone.
And it's never wrong, unless you think about it; then it becomes what you make it. So I 'spose it's a blessing Spiritually and a curse physically....being emotion follows thought. But, feeling, well, that precedes it all.
Really well written, capturing an essence of 'intuition' and sensitivity to 'vibes'. Welcome to DUP
My take is that it is a useful faculty of consciousness giving us quicker information than the intellect - as long as we can handle the emotional aspects and let them pass-on-through without being overwhelmed.
First time I've seen someone list Shel Silverstein as one of their favoured writers - I really like him too.
My take is that it is a useful faculty of consciousness giving us quicker information than the intellect - as long as we can handle the emotional aspects and let them pass-on-through without being overwhelmed.
First time I've seen someone list Shel Silverstein as one of their favoured writers - I really like him too.
15th Apr 2017 9:12pm
Thank you Josh, I appreciate the feed back! I am really enjoying DUP! And, my grandmother read Shel to me as a child and I have always loved him.
