No Poetry

This really hit a nerve with me Crim.  I'm dealing with some aches and pains and it helps to know I'm not alone.  I just wish I could describe the pain with your kind of eloquence.  You address the psychological and emotional aspects just as well and with incredible flair.  Excellent write.  

thank you dearest Sir Crow sending love to you on your own pain.. love Crim

Oh by all means that whiskey train is always leaving A shattered mark trying to get control of that HANGOVER. Eh, time draws near for yet another blast of rotgut, or primetime whisky and you find yourself doing it all over again. Ain't we got fun though?  
 
I don't think what I say counts for much. Sad. Guess I am too intense.

thank you Jerry I think I'm done with this train for good.. love the way you think and cherish your thoughts.. love Brenda

I'll send you over some Vicodin ...hope you feel better soon

thank you Tim would love a Vicodin about now ;) love Crim

You have a very descriptive way of writing that allows the reader to visualize and relate to you.

You remain in my heart.

thank you graciously Kim.. love you lady.. xo Brenda

Love sucks,
then you try to drown it
in a bottle of whiskey
only to find he drank you
to the last drop ...
pills won`t do; they
don`t have the same effect;
a hangover only reminds you
that your pain from his
was real ...

Please get better;
there`s more tall drinking whiskey`s
still out there ... ;)

~love you, my Queen ... Devlin

thank you my Queen I absolutely loved your comment.. yes indeed more out there to drink from ;) love you.. xo Brenda

"no beauty will be uttered
from these lips today " - what a fantastic falsehood as evidenced by these gems that followed:

"your spirit impaled me"

"as you leak from both sides of your mouth"

"left me aching  
without a thought to spill"

nice job!

thank you for seeing beauty in this write Poetrician.. I deeply appreciate your thoughts.. love Crim

such a sad write :-)

sending you 1000 ehugs - warm, soft and cheery :-)

aw thank you David hugs you tightly back :) love Brenda

You begin by stating there will be no beauty emitted by you and then immediately prove yourself wrong.  Beauty in the dark, dark angel.  Your pen will bleed no other color.. beauty in its many shades.  I do hope the pain eases soon.  

thank you lovely one sigh you are right there is beauty even in the dark.. so beautiful is your comment I deeply appreciate you.. love Crim

I got a half pint of 101 in my back pocket.
What you say we sit on the curb and do shots and piss behind the mailbox

High octane ink B

xx

sounds like a plan lol love your humor thank you my dear friend :) love Brenda

whiskey train don't stop for the rain or pain, Crim,
it's a hard ride for poets...

indeed it doesn't John thank you for your poetic comment.. love Crim

That train always howls in the distance,
reminding us just how much we'd like
be on it, riding the rails.
Still, you write with an achingly beautiful passion,
taking us along for the ride.
And no one should have to ride alone...

thank you lovely Kasai yes indeed riding alone is not for any of us.. love Crim

Your NO poetry was pretty damn good poetry in these eyes, though is felt achingly sad. :(

thank you dearest Poe for putting a smile on my face :) love Crim

Unfortunately you can't escape from pain... you can numb it, to find it out comes back with a vengeance...

"the devil has his ways
he enters silently
creeps up on you
slips inside & takes control" > amazing lines, the same can be said about depression...

Great write, dear Crim!

Love, Duende

thank you beautiful Duende yeah that damn pain will always come back and bite harder when the numb wears off.. love Crim

Reads poetically to me pretty  lady!  ;)

thank you beautiful :) love Crim

My Beautiful Brenda....oh how I can relate to this as you well know...I have been away for quite a spell and keeping me company were these lines....brilliant!

"all for that mellow feeling
to quiet the internal storms
 
the devil has his ways
he enters silently
creeps up on you
slips inside & takes control
 
with wild giggles
the spirits have their way  
as you leak from both sides of your mouth
the things they would have you say"

You've captured this darkness with perfection! I love you so much

Love Taryn xoxo

thank you beautiful one for highlighting those lines yes indeed darkness does indeed do this at times.. I love you so much! xo Brenda