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Think Of You
I start to think of you
And my heart begins to melt
Since I met you
I've felt things I've never felt
You're in every thought I have
Which makes me smile
You got my heart racing
I hope this lasts a while
Just hearing your voice
Makes me forget my sorrow
And when we stop talking tonight
I'm lost until tomorrow
And my heart begins to melt
Since I met you
I've felt things I've never felt
You're in every thought I have
Which makes me smile
You got my heart racing
I hope this lasts a while
Just hearing your voice
Makes me forget my sorrow
And when we stop talking tonight
I'm lost until tomorrow
Published 24th Aug 2011
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24th Aug 2011 5:40pm
24th Aug 2011 9:13pm
Wow.
I love all of your writing.
You are so truely talented.
I can relate to pretty much all of them and i love them all wether i can relate or not ^-^
But WOW.<3
Amazing, keep it up! ;]
I love all of your writing.
You are so truely talented.
I can relate to pretty much all of them and i love them all wether i can relate or not ^-^
But WOW.<3
Amazing, keep it up! ;]
24th Aug 2011 10:35pm
Thank you Half Broken Hearted Girl. I'm glad you like my poems. I try to write all of them to where others can relate because I feel like the best writers write to make their readers understand how the writer feels. If that makes sense.
25th Aug 2011 9:44pm
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27th Aug 2011 11:18pm
You are so right. I relate so much to that.
"Just hearing your voice
Makes me forget my sorrow
And when we stop talking tonight
I'm lost until tomorrow"
"Just hearing your voice
Makes me forget my sorrow
And when we stop talking tonight
I'm lost until tomorrow"
5th Sep 2011 8:44pm
