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Once he called me Jezebel
How high we rise in the blue throes
of carnality. Clandestine lovers,
rudely breaching tyrant walls
which hold illicit obscenities captive.
The hunger for unadorned skin is intrinsically primal.
Beyond naked flesh, my heart is not a slave to morals
or shame and I wear no disguise
of the blatantly sexual creature that I am.
Tender and exposed to the agony of us
I submit to you, my body offered in any position,
all of my feminine portals open
to embrace your savage desires.
I take it, that violence which is your passion,
I take it and lay myself under you.
“I threw myself into that fire, threw myself into it, into him, and let myself burn.”
― Sarah J. Maas, A Court of Thornes and Roses
(Photo by Dustin Hollywood, model: Ashly Marie Fox)
of carnality. Clandestine lovers,
rudely breaching tyrant walls
which hold illicit obscenities captive.
The hunger for unadorned skin is intrinsically primal.
Beyond naked flesh, my heart is not a slave to morals
or shame and I wear no disguise
of the blatantly sexual creature that I am.
Tender and exposed to the agony of us
I submit to you, my body offered in any position,
all of my feminine portals open
to embrace your savage desires.
I take it, that violence which is your passion,
I take it and lay myself under you.
“I threw myself into that fire, threw myself into it, into him, and let myself burn.”
― Sarah J. Maas, A Court of Thornes and Roses
(Photo by Dustin Hollywood, model: Ashly Marie Fox)
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Re. Once he called me Jezebel
10th Apr 2017 11:42am
I know what passion is, Kas,
& I've seen the beautiful;
& a woman who lays right there where you say,
is the most beautiful...
& I've seen the beautiful;
& a woman who lays right there where you say,
is the most beautiful...
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Re: Re. Once he called me Jezebel
10th Apr 2017 4:26pm
Unconditionally giving herself, she endures. Her strength lies in her willingness and she craves the intensity of a man over her. Passion, John, is beauty. Thank you for sharing it with me...
Re. Once he called me Jezebel
10th Apr 2017 12:17pm
just fantastic...sensual, direct, offering, yet with intent and purpose. well done!
love this line:
'my heart is not a slave to morals'
love this line:
'my heart is not a slave to morals'
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Re: Re. Once he called me Jezebel
10th Apr 2017 4:31pm
Thanks for the RL and great comment, appreciate your coming to share your thoughts. I enjoyed the visit...
Re. Once he called me Jezebel
10th Apr 2017 1:02pm
Blown away by this one, Kasai!
I adore how open and honest you are... and skilled!
Yeah... I felt this one... underneath my skin...
I adore how open and honest you are... and skilled!
Yeah... I felt this one... underneath my skin...
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Re: Re. Once he called me Jezebel
10th Apr 2017 4:34pm
You flatter me, sweet lady, always amazing comments you leave me with. To know a reader felt it along with me, is the best compliment of all. Thank you much, Duende...
Re. Once he called me Jezebel
10th Apr 2017 5:50pm
excellent carnality makes me hungry for such a man to ravage me in such a way..
love Crim
love Crim
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Re: Re. Once he called me Jezebel
10th Apr 2017 6:04pm
Ah yes, most definately a delicious flavor, thank you much, talented lady, I look forward to your kind visits always...
Re. Once he called me Jezebel
Anonymous
10th Apr 2017 6:18pm
Beautiful, Kasai ...
I am *speechless* by this
remarkable piece
so my voice will echo all those
before me ... in awe ...

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Re: Re. Once he called me Jezebel
12th Apr 2017 8:01am
A speechless poet is the kindest compliment, thank you for those lovely non-words, Devlin, I appreciate them much...
Re. Once he called me Jezebel
10th Apr 2017 6:44pm
It takes more than strength and trust to give yourself wholely to another...You brought along courage and left us lingering in your freedom....And that quote ..To die for....You sing your soul dear poet 🤗
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Re: Re. Once he called me Jezebel
12th Apr 2017 5:39pm
More than trust, yes, that certain nameless something that comes from a much deeper place. Perhaps the same place where poetry is born. Thank you, Tim, for such a thoughtful comment...
Re. Once he called me Jezebel
11th Apr 2017 2:05am
This works really well with the quote, it illustrates it and gives it a life of its own, like fire...
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Re: Re. Once he called me Jezebel
12th Apr 2017 5:42pm
I found the quote after writing this one and it really seemed perfect for it. Love it when that happens. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, PR, much appreciated...
Re. Once he called me Jezebel
Anonymous
11th Apr 2017 3:41am
Sweet Kasai...another one with such a different feel to it but one that I feel at home with at the same time...when a woman is "one" with him, there are no limitations...a full offering of all that she has and is...this was amazing...I'm keeping this one close...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn

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Re: Re. Once he called me Jezebel
12th Apr 2017 5:47pm
There you go making me smile again. That feeling, that 'oneness' is quite a unique and intense experience. You've described it perfectly, no limitations. Such a beautiful comment, sweet lady, I'm honored you've decided to keep this one close. Also, congrats on poet of the week, it is well deserved...
Re. Once he called me Jezebel
11th Apr 2017 4:02am
There's a reason we burn, and it's for Poetry such as this.
"Beyond naked flesh, my heart is not a slave to morals
or shame and I wear no disguise
of the blatantly sexual creature that I am."
That is SO naturally a woman with the man she adores. That is the matriarchal power of Love.
"Beyond naked flesh, my heart is not a slave to morals
or shame and I wear no disguise
of the blatantly sexual creature that I am."
That is SO naturally a woman with the man she adores. That is the matriarchal power of Love.
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Re: Re. Once he called me Jezebel
12th Apr 2017 5:56pm
Oh yes, how we burn, and with such intensity. They way we embrace ourselves in the arms of another is just beautiful. Thank you for the visit, wise one, how I enjoy your thoughts...
Re. Once he called me Jezebel
17th Apr 2017 9:00am
Re. Once he called me Jezebel
3rd May 2017 12:22pm
Tender and exposed to the agony of us
I submit to you, my body offered in any position,
all of my feminine portals open
I love this part!!!!
I submit to you, my body offered in any position,
all of my feminine portals open
I love this part!!!!
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Re: Re. Once he called me Jezebel
4th May 2017 11:50pm
Thanks so much, I really appreciate that, and my apologies for the slow reply...