deepundergroundpoetry.com

Conversation: A wise tiger (Jade-Pandora) & a chirpy bird (KDAmB)

From the six word challenge collaboration with my endless friend KDAmB!
(KDAmB in regular font, me in italisized font)


mature should not
automatically mean old

I sure feel old right now

old indeed
is pure solid gold!

then surely
I'm a rich woman


who's ever denied
that very fact?

the midst of
my own storm


storms come storms go
you remain

my storm is
like Jupiter's eye


all eyes do close
one day

including one's third eye
always unseen


believing is seeing
and vice versa!

but some think seeing
confirms moreso


when in love
eyes don't matter

you have a point
about believing


faith and confidence
the two eyes

and the third
guides the two


that's why we meditate
eyes closed


This was fun, unwinding, working off stress, whatever each of us was doing there
at the 6 word challenge on the endless forum.  We decided to put our postings together
as a collaboration!
Written by Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
Published
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 7 reading list entries 1
comments 8 reads 791
Commenting Preference: 
The author is looking for friendly feedback.

Latest Forum Discussions
POETRY
Today 00:08am by ajay
SPEAKEASY
Yesterday 10:54pm by Josh
SPEAKEASY
Yesterday 10:35pm by Josh
SPEAKEASY
Yesterday 5:59pm by SweetKittyCat5
COMPETITIONS
Yesterday 5:34pm by wallyroo92
COMPETITIONS
Yesterday 2:31pm by Numer90