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Conversation: A wise tiger (Jade-Pandora) & a chirpy bird (KDAmB)
From the six word challenge collaboration with my endless friend KDAmB!
(KDAmB in regular font, me in italisized font)
mature should not
automatically mean old
I sure feel old right now
old indeed
is pure solid gold!
then surely
I'm a rich woman
who's ever denied
that very fact?
the midst of
my own storm
storms come storms go
you remain
my storm is
like Jupiter's eye
all eyes do close
one day
including one's third eye
always unseen
believing is seeing
and vice versa!
but some think seeing
confirms moreso
when in love
eyes don't matter
you have a point
about believing
faith and confidence
the two eyes
and the third
guides the two
that's why we meditate
eyes closed
This was fun, unwinding, working off stress, whatever each of us was doing there
at the 6 word challenge on the endless forum. We decided to put our postings together
as a collaboration!
(KDAmB in regular font, me in italisized font)
mature should not
automatically mean old
I sure feel old right now
old indeed
is pure solid gold!
then surely
I'm a rich woman
who's ever denied
that very fact?
the midst of
my own storm
storms come storms go
you remain
my storm is
like Jupiter's eye
all eyes do close
one day
including one's third eye
always unseen
believing is seeing
and vice versa!
but some think seeing
confirms moreso
when in love
eyes don't matter
you have a point
about believing
faith and confidence
the two eyes
and the third
guides the two
that's why we meditate
eyes closed
This was fun, unwinding, working off stress, whatever each of us was doing there
at the 6 word challenge on the endless forum. We decided to put our postings together
as a collaboration!
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