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one gets over it...
first time he told a woman he loved her
he panicked, feelings of no longer being
free and could he take it back
without hurting anybody, he was pretty
scared, although eventually...
Published 31st Mar 2017
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31st Mar 2017 1:35am
31st Mar 2017 1:44am
yeah, guess eventually he can see that being free doesn't mean being alone...
31st Mar 2017 2:03am
31st Mar 2017 3:45am
Bogart's gf was a murderer so he had to turn her in;
she said 'I thought you loved me.'
he said 'yeah, but we get over that.'
(from 'Dead Reckoning')...
she said 'I thought you loved me.'
he said 'yeah, but we get over that.'
(from 'Dead Reckoning')...
31st Mar 2017 10:02pm
2nd Apr 2017 1:10am
you really are the master of making a poetic point in such few words :-) It's a wee cracker :-)
2nd Apr 2017 1:49am
