Commenting Preference:
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Re: Re. Coat
30th Mar 2017 1:18am
Re. Coat
29th Mar 2017 7:43am
No hook for you to hang it on, because you are the hook that it hangs on. A nice bath of light should dissolve the dark material. Nice write. Short yet captures that all consuming feeling that heavy darkness brings. I can feel the thickness of the coat and how it almost sticks to you.
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Re: Re. Coat
30th Mar 2017 1:22am
thank you - your comments fascinate me - I was kinda thinking that there was no hook, therefore I was forced to wear the coat. I like the idea of a bath in light :-) :-)
Re. Coat
29th Mar 2017 9:21pm
Re: Re. Coat
30th Mar 2017 1:25am
That was deliberate - I wanted to use as few words as possible thank you :-)
Re. Coat
29th Mar 2017 10:41pm
and I was just wondering
what does one put in
these pockets of darkness
... :(
what does one put in
these pockets of darkness
... :(
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Re. Coat
30th Mar 2017 1:27am
I am thinking "Coal or soot." :-)
thanks for the read and the pithy comment :-)
thanks for the read and the pithy comment :-)
Re. Coat
Anonymous
30th Mar 2017 2:36am
Hey David.......this is a short cool ink.......for me thinking that's for sure......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Coat
30th Mar 2017 3:15am
it's interesting to see responses. I was deliberately trying to cause an effect with as few words as possible :-) glad you liked it :-)
Re. Coat
Anonymous
1st Apr 2017 2:19am
The coat is a one size fits all - no matter the size... This is power in a tiny pack. I like it.
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Re: Re. Coat
1st Apr 2017 10:42pm
everyone owns this coat, main difference some have hangers :-) thank you for reading and commenting :-)
Re. Coat
6th Apr 2017 1:09pm
Re: Re. Coat
7th Apr 2017 00:17am
I am so glad it doesn't :-) thank you again so much for the read and the comment :-) x 1,000,000