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Wet Dream
floating
on the lake
I contemplate
slipping beneath the surface
giving myself to liquid depths
pallid limbs
thrashing
fighting
the pressure of water
ceasing to struggle
surrendering
releasing
swallowing darkness
embracing a lover
sensuous
passionate
hidden desires
suppressed upon waking
from restless sleep
aching
needing
sexual release
exquisite trembling
satiating my hunger
caressing
plummeting
into orgasmic bliss
rising back to the surface
floating
on the lake
I contemplate
slipping beneath the surface
giving myself to liquid depths
pallid limbs
thrashing
fighting
the pressure of water
ceasing to struggle
surrendering
releasing
swallowing darkness
embracing a lover
sensuous
passionate
hidden desires
suppressed upon waking
from restless sleep
aching
needing
sexual release
exquisite trembling
satiating my hunger
caressing
plummeting
into orgasmic bliss
rising back to the surface
floating
Published 22nd Aug 2011
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Anonymous
22nd Aug 2011 5:31pm
Now that's the way to wade off into a wet dream! Enjoyed.
tornado
tornado
22nd Aug 2011 7:01pm
22nd Aug 2011 6:51pm
2 dream
bout where its wet n between
doze 2 long sexy things
God's Given feminine transportation means
is a Beautiful scene
bcuz nstead of oil i drill 4 cream
& i Love da sound of passionate screams
& da gushy sound dat strokes of moisture sings
& i no every1 wants dat on der teams....
bout where its wet n between
doze 2 long sexy things
God's Given feminine transportation means
is a Beautiful scene
bcuz nstead of oil i drill 4 cream
& i Love da sound of passionate screams
& da gushy sound dat strokes of moisture sings
& i no every1 wants dat on der teams....
22nd Aug 2011 7:02pm
26th Aug 2011 9:29pm
So that was you in my dream last night, eh? Couldn't tell behind the mask, but how else would you know what was drifting through my subconscious mind while I slept? Do you come here often? I find that after waking from such dreams, the continuation of sensation is the only way to return to my slumberous state, where I can once again seek a mysterious lover that makes me feel like the Joker trying to remove Batman's cowl. The conclusion to the story, next week, same bat time, same bat channel...
Excellent poem, outstanding imagery and a rhythmic flow that keeps going beyond the boundaries of the beginning and end.
Excellent poem, outstanding imagery and a rhythmic flow that keeps going beyond the boundaries of the beginning and end.
