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Zero sense.
A homeless man sits.
Nothing to give but kindness
yet he laughs out loud.
Not in our society -
do his barrels make much sense.
Nothing to give but kindness
yet he laughs out loud.
Not in our society -
do his barrels make much sense.
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Re. Zero sense.
27th Mar 2017 9:55pm
Perfect. The happiest are the most content with what "little" the world thinks they have.
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Re: Re. Zero sense.
27th Mar 2017 10:08pm
Every time you make a comment on my work, it brightens my day. Thank you. LostGirl. (:
Re. Zero sense.
27th Mar 2017 9:55pm
I like that , thought provoking write.
Excellent, as always LostGirl
:)
Good job
Excellent, as always LostGirl
:)
Good job
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Re: Re. Zero sense.
27th Mar 2017 10:09pm
I love poetry that makes you take a second glance. Oh, how the mind reels. Thank you dearest, Leo. (: LostGirl
Re. Zero sense.
28th Mar 2017 6:19am
Actually passed a homeless guy only yesterday and old of years but what struck me was his belly laughs to no one but himself
A past perhaps not always so upsetting
A past perhaps not always so upsetting
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Re: Re. Zero sense.
28th Mar 2017 9:01pm
The grass may truly be greener on the other side. Thank you for adding your insights dear, Rose. (: LostGirl
Re: Re. Zero sense.
I'm glad you've found a home now, Kavik. Stay safe and well. (:
Your friend, LostGirl.
Your friend, LostGirl.
Re. Zero sense.
16th Aug 2019 2:16am
a person who has little in the way of possessions
is truly the Freest of us all
and has more to glean joy from
(i speak from experience as i used to be homeless for near 2 years)
Free Spirits don't care much what "our" society thinks about them
Love this thought provoking Brevity
very relevant spill, even today
is truly the Freest of us all
and has more to glean joy from
(i speak from experience as i used to be homeless for near 2 years)
Free Spirits don't care much what "our" society thinks about them
Love this thought provoking Brevity
very relevant spill, even today
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Re: Re. Zero sense.
16th Aug 2019 2:26am
I am truly humbled and honoured you have ready ANY of my works because I stand in awe of your talents.
Thank you, Tallen for the the feedback.
Yours,
LostGirl
Thank you, Tallen for the the feedback.
Yours,
LostGirl
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Re: Re. Zero sense.
24th Oct 2019 3:11am
I always keep it real, Danny.
Thank you.
I am drawn to the kind and genuine souls.
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Thank you.
I am drawn to the kind and genuine souls.
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