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Re. Silent cry
25th Mar 2017 5:47am
Excellent haiku lostgirl !
Well done :)
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So much sorrow in this :(
Life has its moments of tragedy
It also has it glory
Let the light shine and warm your heart ,
Friend :)
Well done :)
...
So much sorrow in this :(
Life has its moments of tragedy
It also has it glory
Let the light shine and warm your heart ,
Friend :)
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Re. Silent cry
25th Mar 2017 6:21am
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25th Mar 2017 8:38pm
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26th Mar 2017 00:18am
Re. Silent cry
25th Mar 2017 3:41pm
Lost One, I've felt this way many a time in my life. Those who don't fear death view its presence as a welcomed relief. (And of course after seeing 'Joe Black'...but I digress.)
This is very well written with a left punch of sharp emotion to the heart. While traditional Haikus eschew punctuation, I enjoy the modern that integrates it.
On a personal note, I'm happy Death hasn't stopped for you yet.
This is very well written with a left punch of sharp emotion to the heart. While traditional Haikus eschew punctuation, I enjoy the modern that integrates it.
On a personal note, I'm happy Death hasn't stopped for you yet.
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Re: Re. Silent cry
25th Mar 2017 8:42pm
Knowing that you can relate to my words, Ahavati, is so heartwarming. Thank you for your wonderful critique. I am glad Death has not stopped for me as well. It would be a pity because I have only just begun to live. (:
By the way, we can't blame Brad Pitt for trying. (;
By the way, we can't blame Brad Pitt for trying. (;
Re. Silent cry
26th Mar 2017 2:59am
Re. Silent cry
26th Mar 2017 4:14am
Re. Silent cry
Anonymous
26th Mar 2017 8:08pm
If people only understood how welcoming death feels to us. It is a curse we harbor, the strongest of our disease.
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Re. Silent cry
27th Mar 2017 4:58am
Thank you for taking the time to read my work Puzzle_Piece. I am grateful for your insight. (:
Re. Silent cry
29th Mar 2017 8:05am
Re: Re. Silent cry
31st Mar 2017 4:45pm
You hit the nail right on the head, LobodeSanPedro. Thank you for following me. This means so much more than you know. (: LostGirl
Re. Silent cry
16th Aug 2019 2:12am
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16th Aug 2019 2:24am
You won’t be hearing from me when it is. (;
Thanks, lil Snaggy for your feedback.
Much-o appreciated.
Yours,
LostGirl
Thanks, lil Snaggy for your feedback.
Much-o appreciated.
Yours,
LostGirl