yeah, this is legit. tbh i feel like your lyrics are dope af, but your flow is not as solid as some of your pieces.. that being said it is still good no doubt. i think if you found the proper beat to ride it could be that next level shit! still tho... props and respect!
I like this. It's very creative how you matched the characters to their actions. I appreciate you expressing your craft. I have been reciting my poems on youtube too. You have inspired me to join this platform. Ihave been looking for a poetry home and I think I may have found it.